People always wants than what they have already or something even different or they are never satisfy what they have already do you agree with fhis statement
It is indeed a fact, that humans are selfish and introverts in this materialistic world and sarcastic as well by nature. I personally believes that citizens will never ever pause in a conclusion of what they already has and satisfy their urge in life. I will justify my points below.
First and foremost, the people who are in the field of film industry will focus kneenly on bulding up their own status. To illustrate a person who is acting in a small budgeted movies for the first time over the period the movie which he acted may get recognised and become noticed. He will try to get many offers in movies later on his intention will be making hit movies fame and more money leading a luxourious life .
Secondly, the education is also plays an important life in enrolling a person selfish nature. To cite it the one who is studying in a school level will listen others educztion level who truimph in life. He imitates their way and try to be more successful than they were. It is also a process of walking on other shoes rather than thinking about himself. And when he completes the education he will basically try to grab up more oppurtunities in order to sustain a status and fame in the society.
However every coin has two sides. Some believes that over the age people will settle down with what they have. They wont focus more on satisfaction but on living with what they have already.
To draw the curtains, the urge of satisfacting the needs will move on likely by steps in life cycle of life. It will remain as a part of human anatomy. It is indeed diffucult to provide what the person needed but to find the entire stuffs to calm down his urge of satisfaction.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 135, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[1]
Message: The pronoun 'I' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'believe'
Suggestion: believe
...rcastic as well by nature. I personally believes that citizens will never ever pause in ...
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Line 3, column 419, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...and more money leading a luxourious life . Secondly, the education is also play...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...in a status and fame in the society. However every coin has two sides. Some believes...
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Line 9, column 279, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... to calm down his urge of satisfaction.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1380.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.52459016393 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4347348317 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550819672131 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.7850412539 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.1764705882 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9411764706 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.64705882353 7.06120827912 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179452036961 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0643302732233 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111202081418 0.0667982634062 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121883183276 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.131674170422 0.056905535591 231% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 13.0946893788 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.64 12.4159519038 70% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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