People face for greater risks in our modern way of life when they did it in there past .How far do you agree or disagree?
It is a glare fact that, older days are tougher and more discomfort for living than advanced way of life, that presently seen. I disagree with the statement that a place of good facilities and well advanced modern era is not at greater risk but the older years is riskier and dangerous to live in.
To begin with, if we make a clear search towards past we can come accross diseases are more communicable, the facilities and drugs to control spreading around the community or area was not much advanced and developed. More over mortality and morbidity rate were high contrast to present years. In our era of modern science and technology it is easy to compact any sort of infection as well. The doctors, scientist are more educated and knowlagable. Research in every aspects of through diseases with experiences.
Secondly, crime in the time of older years was raminant. It is much more difficult to trace out the criminal, who commited the crime with supporting proofs contrast to present. In this modern year it is not easier for a criminal to roam around after he or she convicted to a crime. The law is stronger and the officers are well trained to capture thieves in a glimpse. Well upgraded technologies ,powerful equipments are the fountain to tackle a crime level to a extend.
However, some believes that the past is old and sweet as a wine. The living style was more relaxing and food which are cultivated entirely from crops through agriculture, Although people were healthy and fit. But food is not one among the priority, it is definetly security and friendly environment. And afterall we all knowing the saying "prevention is better than cure" that is only advanced and supporting to its outcome in this modern years than past was.
To sum up, the life nowadays is much easier with less disease, due to the upgraded drugs and technologies. So living in this present is safer and far better than past, where even the people could not efford saving lifes despite scarcity in faclities and knowledge without any research to overcome problems.
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'however', 'if', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'well', 'sort of', 'to begin with', 'to sum up']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.219387755102 0.247107183377 89% => OK
Verbs: 0.142857142857 0.155533422707 92% => OK
Adjectives: 0.125 0.0946595960268 132% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0612244897959 0.0501214627716 122% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0331632653061 0.0437548338989 76% => OK
Prepositions: 0.114795918367 0.122226691241 94% => OK
Participles: 0.0229591836735 0.0403226058552 57% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.66970076602 2.80594681477 95% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0408163265306 0.0326793684256 125% => OK
Particles: 0.00510204081633 0.00163938923432 311% => OK
Determiners: 0.0892857142857 0.0861772015684 104% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00510204081633 0.021408717616 24% => Some modal verbs wanted.
WH_determiners: 0.0127551020408 0.011925033212 107% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2091.0 1933.35771543 108% => OK
No of words: 354.0 316.048096192 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.90677966102 6.12580529183 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.20517956788 103% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.330508474576 0.374742101984 88% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.265536723164 0.28420135186 93% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.203389830508 0.203846283523 100% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.107344632768 0.137316102897 78% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66970076602 2.80594681477 95% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.037074148 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559322033898 0.56093040696 100% => OK
Word variations: 62.1774262093 60.7387585426 102% => OK
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0891783567 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.6666666667 20.7743622355 95% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.0626017338 49.517814964 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.166666667 127.492653851 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6666666667 20.7743622355 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.555555555556 0.814263465372 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 3.99599198397 275% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 46.2203389831 49.1944974215 94% => OK
Elegance: 1.50537634409 1.69124875643 89% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142084949083 0.332605444948 43% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0901399919164 0.102741220458 88% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0595906679333 0.0668466124924 89% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.555120355164 0.534860350844 104% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.134506017704 0.148594505496 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.063377180634 0.134430193775 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0542788391579 0.0742795772207 73% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.349407260686 0.324371583561 108% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.037158201362 0.0638462369009 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102439333316 0.228012699653 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0264969809356 0.058150111329 46% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.68436873747 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.41683366733 88% => OK
Positive topic words: 8.0 5.90881763527 135% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 2.5751503006 155% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 1.9629258517 51% => OK
Total topic words: 13.0 10.4468937876 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.