People are surrounded by advertising and there is an increasing effect on our lives. Do you think positive effects outweigh the negative effects?
With technological development, nowadays, people are surrounded by advertising. The effects of advertising on people's lives have become more and more clearer. From my point of view, while advertising may bring about some benefits, I would argue it is eclipsed the drawbacks.
There is no denying that advertising plays a significant role in people's buying products. First of all, advertising informs and assists consumers in making the best purchasing decision possible. Advertising disseminates crucial information about a product's relative qualities and distinguishing traits in terms of quality, utility, price, durability, and convenience. Furthermore, advertising also serves as a source of information and education for consumers. It enables him to know precisely what he desires and where he might have it. As a result of advertising, consumers can enjoy new amenities and make their lives easier, more comfortable, and enjoyable.
However, there are a number of disadvantages of advertising that people should take into consideration. The principal one is that advertising can confuse customers. Advertising frequently depicts a distorted view of reality. The information given in the advertisement was something else whereas the actual product was quite different from it. Consumers that believe in advertising purchase the product. Then, they feel cheated after using it. People are being drawn away from reality and towards the realm of artificiality by advertisements these days. People learn about new products using this media. However, only a small number of items are suitable for them. The shine of new things irritates them much. They want to buy them, but they don't have the funds to do so. As a result, individuals become dissatisfied with their current situation. Advertising, when viewed as a social evil, can be said to pose a threat to social ideals.
In conclusion, while advertising may have some positive aspects, I believe they are outweighed by the more significant negative aspects.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, may, so, then, whereas, while, in conclusion, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1707.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.52427184466 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16598155684 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611650485437 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 541.8 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.8921267788 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.2173913043 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.4347826087 20.7667163134 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184404171726 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0470884246366 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0536980856099 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120407712429 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0516342238871 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 41.36 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.14 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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