People attend colleges or universities for many different reasons (for example, new experiences, career preparation, increased knowledge etc.). Why do you think people attend colleges or universities?
A complete consideration of people’s view about whether to attend colleges or universities is different to present because they are so varied. Some of them believe holding the high level of education as well as valuable degree required for the students to start their career and present a great reputation with society status. Part of them with an ambition that college is a short cut way to reach their potential and improving the current job position, to be specialised in diversity area has become the trend to run a business.
The current society and its educational structure are far different then they had been a century back when the result of self-educated people could gain a good career and satisfaction the basic work merit. Enrolled in college, people who do not know what are their human nature talent, the process complete the class not only cultivated critical thinking but can find what they really interest to major. They also will not regret the industry they involved in. Furthermore, in today’s world, universities are the authority to declare a person to have the necessary education to be ready for the job. And high level education seem like a name card to claim people they work hard and they are smarter ,earning the respect from society criticize.
On the other hand, the employees who keep the same position for a period and enrolled universities to get further education to enhance their horizon or aim to put themself into a milestone, even break the bottle neck in their career life. It is useful to run business cause their steotype concept have been revolution.
In conclusion, amount of people attend universities as a tradition which has been referred as mandatory by society trend. A certain certification is enough for them ready to work.And we human being usually attend universities as a hope of achieving greater understanding, new skill also can reasonable construct a solid promotion in future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, really, so, then, well, in conclusion, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1635.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06191950464 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83929118661 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597523219814 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 521.1 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.9198865602 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.25 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.9166666667 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24441695472 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0852579380078 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0689115905896 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147146923937 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0600108933924 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.