The line graph depicts the average carbon dioxide emissions in four countries between 1967 and 2007. Overall, It can be seen that the United Kingdom had the highest carbon dioxide emission rates among the four countries; while Portugal had the lowest emission levels of carbon dioxide in 1967. In addition, it can be observed that Italy and Portugal had the increasing trends gradually during these four decades.In contrast, United Kingdom dropped steadily; meanwhile Sweden experienced an increasing trend significantly from 1967 to 2007.
Increasing from approximately 9 metric tonnes in 1967 to 11 metric tonnes in 1977, Sweden’s rate then plunged to a low of just 6 metric tonnes in 2007.
Portugal in the begin with around just 1 metric tonnes in 1967.This was followed by a period of exponential growth to the 5 metic tonnes converged with Sweden in 2007. As it can be seen that Italy has a similar trend as Portugal, which increase gradually to the almost 7 metric tonnes sustained in this rage in the period from 1997 to 2007. It can be observed that United Kingdom began at roughly 11 metric tonnes of carbon dioxide was the highest that in the year of 1977, followed by a steady fall.
It is interesting notice that apparent that although the U.K. and Portugal had a reversed pattern, they sent out the highest and lowest amount of CO2 among four nations over the period in question.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, then, while, in addition, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 16.0 32.9175257732 49% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 26.3917525773 155% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1170.0 937.175257732 125% => OK
No of words: 238.0 206.0 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91596638655 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59094859417 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.491596638655 0.622605031667 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 342.0 290.88556701 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 16.3608247423 177% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 38.6813908747 44.8134815571 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.25 76.5299724578 191% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.75 16.8248392259 177% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.125 4.34317383033 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205403299005 0.216113520407 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109795322789 0.0766984524023 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0809777276789 0.0603063233224 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113565279453 0.12726935374 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0862876871259 0.0580467560999 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 8.37731958763 198% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.96 70.7449484536 83% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.2 7.45979381443 164% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.85 8.71597938144 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 41.2886597938 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 8.54432989691 159% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 8.15463917526 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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