People buy a product if it fullfills their need there is no need for advertisement. To what extend do you agree or disagree ?
According to statement, masses buy useful products according to their requirements. Therefore, if these products become able to complete their needs,then there is no necessity of advertisements. On Contrast, I completely disagree with this notion and reasons behind this are discussed in the upcoming paragraphs.
To begin with, there are plethora of reasoning which shows that advertisements are necessary for us. First of all, advertisement is the only source of popularity for any sector. In contemporary settings, business and industrial sectors, which are selling their products to public and for the fame of their product, they choose the way of advertisement. Because of this, they advertise their items to public with their whole details and make their popularity. For instance, there are numerous varities of washing powders such tide, nirma and so on. By these advertisements,women become aware of different varieties with their quality, quantity and price of the product. Due to which, they buy according to their choise and budget too. As a result, this become beneficial to them and cheapest way too.
Moreover, the another reason is that, people become aware of new products according to their necessities. This also become helpful to them. For instance, if a person buy new product, however he is not knowledgeable to that item. Then advertisement of that product is the only source through which he gain information about their usage and correct method to use. Therefore advertisements become helpful to public too.
To recapitulate, I personally consider that there is need of advertisement because these are the only way if popularity and also beneficial to public in plenty of ways.
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Suggestion: Therefore,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, for instance, as a result, first of all, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1436.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33828996283 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11975434164 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.527881040892 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 459.0 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.1556611599 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.4705882353 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8235294118 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.52941176471 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260649264717 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0825633689998 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0433288175078 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152241903229 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0327305973861 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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