People do not feel safe either at home or when they are out. What are the causes and the solutions.
Nowadays, a large proportion of people do not feel secured while at home or when they are outside. Occurrence of natural disasters and societal conflict might be the reasons for this, however, ensuring adequate security measures amongst other steps will solve this problems, as will be discussed in the essay.
Incidence of natural disasters such as earthquake,flood and fire outbreak are one of the reasons why individuals do not feel protected within and outside their residential area. These events usually happen suddenly and unaware, and it has led to the death and displacement of many residents. As a result of this,they feel unsafe within and outside their surroundings. Another cogent reason is societal and religious crisis which has accounted for the death of a large number of people. A society whose composition is made up of different people from diverse culture and religion tend to experience crisis which eventually lead to killings and vandalization of properties. Therefore, inhabitants of the society do not feel protected while at their residents and outside. For instance, boko haram insurgency has instilled fear in the inhabitants of the northern areas in Nigeria.
Nevertheless,one of the steps to avoid these issues is adoption of measures by the authorities to reduce the incidence of natural disasters. For example, construction of drainages to avoid flood and provision of materials and equipments by the government in case of emergency. Another possible solution is encouraging cooperation among people of different ethnic groups and cultural background, then adequate security measures should be ensured.
In conclusion, although occurrence of environmental disasters and religious crisis can make people feel insecure whether at home or outside, effective implementation of the suggested solutions will solve this problems.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, nevertheless, so, still, then, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1588.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.61130742049 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12071954593 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565371024735 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 506.7 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.1646998185 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.153846154 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7692307692 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.53846153846 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175078978983 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0678608476087 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101233999364 0.0667982634062 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10925869509 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.055764973625 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.26 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.09 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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