People eat more processed food than they did in the past. Why is this? What are the effects of this?
There is a common fact that these days, humans utilise convenience food more than ever compared to the previous days. This result of trend can be come from people getting busier than in the past and the outcome of such trend may do harm to their physical health.
To begin with, people, in recent years, are much busier than they used to be, which leads them to consume more processed food. It is argued that after the covid 19 pandemic, the job market is more competitive than ever before, which means that employees have to work harder and get more job to be done effectively or they will be laid off and have troubles in financial condition. Most of student in the ages of 18 to 22 in Vietnam, for example, have to work two to three types of professions at the same time, including part-time job, teaching assistant, etcetera.
As a result, it may lead to some negative impacts on physical health of consumers as they consumes too much fast food. It is undeniable that eating this type of food will cause obesity as users absorb so many fats. Also, no one can ensure the quality of the convenience food as the ingredients are not fresh at all. All of these reasons seem contain so many bad influences on humans’ health, as well as their stomaches.
In conclusion, it is undoubted that the trend of using fast food has increased over these years compared to the previous days due to the rising in working hours of workers. Thus, this consequence may lead to some bad impacts on their health, such as stomachache.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 91, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'consume'
Suggestion: consume
...on physical health of consumers as they consumes too much fast food. It is undeniable th...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, may, so, thus, well, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1253.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58974358974 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42822057256 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.589743589744 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 379.8 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.9821488871 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.909090909 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8181818182 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.27272727273 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246522245618 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.084023543494 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0607037188571 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134878665759 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0429762640519 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 50.2224549098 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.64 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 91, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'consume'
Suggestion: consume
...on physical health of consumers as they consumes too much fast food. It is undeniable th...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, may, so, thus, well, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1253.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58974358974 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42822057256 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.589743589744 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 379.8 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.9821488871 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.909090909 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8181818182 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.27272727273 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246522245618 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.084023543494 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0607037188571 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134878665759 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0429762640519 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 50.2224549098 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.64 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.