People emphasizing government to build an advanced transport system rather new road for vehicles that are overcrowding the cities. Do you agree or disagree?
Recently, the phenomenon of learning music in school and its corresponding impact has sparked a heated debate. Although contested by many that the matter of art-related-subject is highly beneficial, such issue is regarded thoroughly both constructive and positive by a substantial number of individuals. I am inclined to believe that the promotion can be a plus, and I will analyze that throughout this essay.
From a social standpoint, music can provide the society with some noticeable effects which are rooted in the fact that learning ability, as well as psychological health, are inextricably bound up. According to my own experience, when I was a university student, I performed an academic experiment which discovered the effectiveness of learning music on educational progression. Thus, beneficial ramifications of both learning how to play musical instruments and composing a piece of music apparently can be seen.
Within the realm of science, music-related-lessens might increase the consequences of wasting lifetime. Moreover, fundamental aspects of musicians` life relate to this reality that the demerits of addiction to drugs pertain to negative to inspiration of some sings. As a tangible example, some scientific research undertaken by a prestigious university has asserted that the downside of rock music is correlated negatively with student`s behavior.
To conclude, while there are several compelling arguments on both sides, I profoundly believe that the benefits of learning music far outweigh its drawbacks. Not only do the advantages of music classes prove the significance of spiritual needs, but also pinpoint outstanding implications.
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| 2018-10-17 | Mohammad.naran | 11 | view |
- People emphasizing government to build an advanced transport system rather new road for vehicles that are overcrowding the cities. Do you agree or disagree? 11
- People emphasizing government to build an advanced transport system rather new road for vehicles that are overcrowding the cities. Do you agree or disagree? 11
- People emphasizing government to build an advanced transport system rather new road for vehicles that are overcrowding the cities. Do you agree or disagree? 11
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, if, moreover, so, thus, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1435.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 249.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.76305220884 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.57680973015 2.80592935109 127% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.650602409639 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.1968052251 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.454545455 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6363636364 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.36363636364 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.013527392575 0.244688304435 6% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00551197981815 0.084324248473 7% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0117606246598 0.0667982634062 18% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.00860543753598 0.151304729494 6% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00907961833928 0.056905535591 16% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.0946893788 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 50.2224549098 64% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.42 12.4159519038 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.75 8.58950901804 125% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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