People live in the 21st century are enjoying the better quality of life compared to the people who lived in the previous centuries. To what do you agree or disagree?
Everything undergoes see of change over a period of time as change is but natural. It is believed that 21st century people experience a superior quality of life compared to the people in past years. But few believe that the diet of our ancestors was far better than today. I certainly concur to the the thought that the caliber of life has standardized in present times and would enumerate the features of better life in the following passage.
Nano technology coupled with biotechnology has made a significant progress in the field of health care, education and environment. In this era of technology almost everything is possible just by one touch at your place and at your convenience. Mobile phones has brought world more closer in terms of communication. Social medias provide a way of interaction with people all over the world and transport facilities had minimized the time duration. Better medical facilities are helpful in expanding the lifespan, identifying, preventing and curing the unknown disease.
Further many machineries are invented which helped to ease the human work. No doubt there are numerous pros for the individuals of 21st century some people believed that our ancestors usually consumed healthier food than us as in this present times adulteration is lowering the food qualities. The restaurants are providing the huge varieties of food for us. Education is training people for nation's better development.
To conclude, technology is providing civilized amenities to the living beings improving their quality of life all over the earth.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 43, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...erything undergoes see of change over a period of time as change is but natural. It is believe...
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Line 1, column 296, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...etter than today. I certainly concur to the the thought that the caliber of life has st...
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Line 1, column 296, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...etter than today. I certainly concur to the the thought that the caliber of life has st...
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Line 3, column 53, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'significant progress'.
Suggestion: significant progress
...ogy coupled with biotechnology has made a significant progress in the field of health care, education ...
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Line 3, column 277, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'closer' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: closer
...nience. Mobile phones has brought world more closer in terms of communication. Social media...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1323.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27091633466 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89215588131 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.593625498008 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 423.0 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.305747368 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.5 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9285714286 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.5 7.06120827912 21% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208579180461 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.064504825883 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0903167820467 0.0667982634062 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121125132982 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0633700460884 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.99 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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