People living in a 21st century generally have a better quality of life than the previous centuries. Do you agree or disagree.
It is irrefutable that, due to enhancement of technology and science, life become more easy and also living standard's rise as compare to past. I believe that, although , its undeniable that in this technological era people live luxurious life and they have every basic facilities, its drawkbacks towrds individuals and society can not be overlooked
Many technological inventions is one of the major success of 21st century. Therfore, people can able to do any kind of work while sitting in home, it make our life more easy and convenient. Online shopping and attending meetings on computers is most suitable evidence of this development. Secondly, developments in scientific field is extremely large. In every day new vaccines are made by scientist due to this doctors are able to cure any kind of disease. As a result, major difference ia occurred in the death ratio as compare to past times. Then, using several fertilisers can improve the soil productivity , no shortage of food witnessed by countries. These factors play a vital role for enhancing the quality of life.
On the other hand, people also face problems that did not exist before. Firstly, level of pollution is reached on deteriorate state because of using unnecessary transport vehicles and other non recyclable material like plastic. This can lead to earth towards their destruction. Secondly, in this contemporary era every individual live in a hurry. People are more busy as compared to past, they don't have time for their families, even they don't have time for themselves. Due to this marriages are broken and bondings between families members are not as strong as in past. People give priority to money then their close ones .
In conculsion, despite having several advatages of this era which leads people towards standard life style and easy availability, cons are also considerable because it make people emotionless and they work like a robot.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, look, second, secondly, so, then, while, kind of, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1616.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16293929712 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8342772807 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607028753994 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 532.8 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.8273178279 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.0588235294 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4117647059 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.23529411765 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 5.01903807615 398% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138187156732 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.038421658831 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0403282815882 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0903210295465 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0153320006499 0.056905535591 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.