Plan A below shows a healtg centre in 2005.Plan B shows the same place in the present day
The map illustrates the reconstruction of health Centre, which made in the year 2005 and also depict the
changes in current time.
Overall, although, health Centre is totally changed as compare to past, few things are remained on the same place as they were in past.
In 2005, the main enterence of hospital was towards the south, which take place in west side in present time. Therefore, reception disk shifted from the centre of the hospital to near by the entrance,opposit to this new play area for children's introduced. There is a enhancement of Consulting room 4 which was not there in 2005, due to this sequence of blocks are made from south west to towards north west.The space for sitting is remained on space place, which is in center.
Furthermore, shape of office is different form past. Next to physiotherapy room, new operation room was constructed. Space for car parking is also expended from 12 spaces to 30 spaces. Therefore, area for garden is shrieked and remain only from south west to North east side.
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- Some people believe that women should play an equal role as men in a country s police force or military force such as the army while others think women are not suitable for these kinds of jobs Discuss both views and give your opinion 89
- Some people say that playing computer games is bad for children whereas others say that it has positive effects on the way children develop Discuss both sides and give your opinion 82
- The graph below descbribe precnetage of news coverage of diffent fileds in two countries of100 days 78
- Computer become more intelligent than humans do you think it is negative or postive development 56
- Plan A below shows a healtg centre in 2005 Plan B shows the same place in the present day 89
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ch made in the year 2005 and also depict the changes in current time. Over...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...de in the year 2005 and also depict the changes in current time. Overall, al...
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Line 4, column 72, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e is totally changed as compare to past, few things are remained on the same plac...
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Line 4, column 129, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the past'?
Suggestion: in the past
...remained on the same place as they were in past. In 2005, the main enterence of hos...
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Line 6, column 121, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...in west side in present time. Therefore, reception disk shifted from the centre o...
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Line 6, column 181, Rule ID: NEAR_BY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nearby'?
Suggestion: nearby
...fted from the centre of the hospital to near by the entrance,opposit to this new play a...
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Line 6, column 201, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , opposit
... of the hospital to near by the entrance,opposit to this new play area for childrens int...
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Line 6, column 267, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...area for childrens introduced. There is a enhancement of Consulting room 4 which ...
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Suggestion: The
...e from south west to towards north west.The space for sitting is remained on space ...
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Line 8, column 162, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ce for car parking is also expended from 12 spaces to 30 spaces. Therefore, area ...
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Line 8, column 247, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... garden is shrieked and remain only from south west to North east side.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, so, therefore, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 861.0 965.302439024 89% => OK
No of words: 176.0 196.424390244 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89204545455 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70229447006 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590909090909 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 252.0 283.868780488 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.6799634202 43.030603864 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.6666666667 112.824112599 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5555555556 22.9334400587 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.77777777778 5.23603664747 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 1.69756097561 648% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0882580606991 0.215688989381 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0360298431611 0.103423049105 35% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0408945106581 0.0843802449381 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.04523869358 0.15604864568 29% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.041912830213 0.0819641961636 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.2329268293 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 11.4140731707 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.36 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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