People living in large cities have to face many problems in everyday life. What are those problems?
Should the government encourage people to move to regional towns?
In this era of modernization and industrialization, <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-8D06D9B3D9B3F490F0C699FBDCE706EE" data-pwa-rule-id="APOS_D" data-pwa-category="grammar" data-pwa-hint="Incorrect noun form" data-pwa-suggestions="people's" data-pwa-heavy="false" data-pwa-dictionary-word="people" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">people</pwa> preferences have <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-FCDC3A6E963502A6246197397B8A7A53" data-pwa-rule-id="READABILITY_2360" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Can you use a more specific verb?" data-pwa-suggestions="transformed" data-pwa-heavy="false" data-pwa-dictionary-word="changed significantly" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">changed </pwa><pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-FCDC3A6E963502A6246197397B8A7A53" data-pwa-rule-id="READABILITY_2360" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Can you use a more specific verb?" data-pwa-suggestions="transformed" data-pwa-heavy="false" data-pwa-dictionary-word="changed significantly" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">significantly</pwa> <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-D173C65DCC4A40D2C0ABF61801DDC2F7" data-pwa-rule-id="READABILITY_457" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Readability may be enhanced by using: to live" data-pwa-suggestions="to live" data-pwa-heavy="false" data-pwa-dictionary-word="in terms of living" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">in terms of living</pwa> space, livelihood and lifestyle. The number of people migrating from rural to urban areas are increasing with each passing day<pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-A332B8F2C10097E45F98B350BC9378D8" data-pwa-rule-id="WHITESPACE" data-pwa-category="grammar" data-pwa-hint="The punctuation mark '.' may require a space after it, not before. Consider moving the space." data-pwa-suggestions=". " data-pwa-heavy="false" data-pwa-dictionary-word=" ." class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done"> .</pwa>But nothing comes free, as people living in urban areas suffer with <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-587892BADAF6C2C7FF1C98674ECE901C" data-pwa-rule-id="SIMPLE_SPELLING" data-pwa-category="spelling" data-pwa-hint="Unknown word: alot" data-pwa-suggestions="a lot~lot~plot~alt~Alot" data-pwa-heavy="false" data-pwa-dictionary-word="alot" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">alot</pwa> of issues, namely traffic, accommodation and pollution. This raises the question that whether the government should play its <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-DE5B5528ABB720BCCD05B504E8BBC8F5" data-pwa-rule-id="UN_COMMA" data-pwa-category="grammar" data-pwa-hint="It appears that you have an unnecessary comma in a compound predicate. Consider removing it." data-pwa-suggestions="part" data-pwa-heavy="false" data-pwa-dictionary-word="part," class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">part,</pwa> and encourage people to <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-41D42970279466299548DC11E7157F54" data-pwa-rule-id="READABILITY_2081" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Readability may be enhanced by using: move" data-pwa-suggestions="move" data-pwa-heavy="false" data-pwa-dictionary-word="relocate" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">relocate</pwa> to small towns rather than overcrowding the city. In this essay I'll address this question and explain my <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-55AEC9A41D8C978DCDD4DB6B14A31843" data-pwa-rule-id="READABILITY_2754" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Readability may be enhanced by removing this" data-pwa-suggestions="(omit)" data-pwa-heavy="false" data-pwa-dictionary-word="own " class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">own </pwa>opinion supporting it with examples.
<pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-43FCCDD38DCC625A383D235A71CA23F5" data-pwa-rule-id="READABILITY_785" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Readability may be enhanced by using: Foremost" data-pwa-suggestions="Foremost" data-pwa-heavy="false" data-pwa-dictionary-word="First and foremost" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">First and foremost</pwa>, I believe that the <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-8A11694BF6BF83B20ACF30808DA59FA3" data-pwa-rule-id="SIMPLE_SPELLING" data-pwa-category="spelling" data-pwa-hint="Unknown word: urabn" data-pwa-suggestions="urban~Arabian" data-pwa-heavy="false" data-pwa-dictionary-word="urabn" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">urabn</pwa> population <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-205A06BA2529B822904E46B30B346CD7" data-pwa-rule-id="READABILITY_626" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Readability may be enhanced by using: enjoys" data-pwa-suggestions="enjoys" data-pwa-heavy="false" data-pwa-dictionary-word="does enjoy" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">does enjoy</pwa> <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-D39DD64412DF0C486EE562EC4F4074A8" data-pwa-rule-id="READABILITY_1365" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Readability may be enhanced by using: several" data-pwa-suggestions="several" data-pwa-heavy="false" data-pwa-dictionary-word="a number of" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">a number of</pwa> facilities <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-86D03A4FC5E4CA0B438A6A26E194C9C9" data-pwa-rule-id="COMMA_SPL" data-pwa-category="grammar" data-pwa-hint="Possible comma splice." data-pwa-suggestions="but;" data-pwa-heavy="false" data-pwa-dictionary-word="but," class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">but,</pwa> it comes with a price, since you can't set foot outside of your house, without getting stuck in traffic. Expensive residence, alarming pollution and deteriorating mental health <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-3EE64EA215A98D02E4C0171447B71D83" data-pwa-rule-id="READABILITY_3_1768" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Readability may be enhanced by using: because of, for" data-pwa-suggestions="because of~for" data-pwa-heavy="false" data-pwa-dictionary-word="due to" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">due to</pwa> stressful lifestyle, everything seems to be a part of a vicious cycle. The only figure of authority, in a country, who can play a positive role in this whole scenario, is the government.
<pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-326B8834355FEAC7994A62C35E04728C" data-pwa-rule-id="READABILITY_814" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Readability may be enhanced by using: Crime" data-pwa-suggestions="Crime" data-pwa-heavy="false" data-pwa-dictionary-word="Moreover, crime" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">Moreover, crime</pwa> rates are almost always high in the city, imparting a venality to the <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-724474F71DDE0DF812013B4094BE5E95" data-pwa-rule-id="SIMPLE_SPELLING" data-pwa-category="spelling" data-pwa-hint="Unknown word: everydaylife" data-pwa-suggestions="everyday life" data-pwa-heavy="false" data-pwa-dictionary-word="everydaylife" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">everydaylife</pwa>. <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-61DFAB0D2B7BE35E96844B35EA135B84" data-pwa-rule-id="SIMPLE_SPELLING" data-pwa-category="spelling" data-pwa-hint="Unknown word: Everytime" data-pwa-suggestions="Every time" data-pwa-heavy="false" data-pwa-dictionary-word="Everytime" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">Everytime</pwa> you flick through the pages of the newspaper or turn on a television there <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-355C00305AAD1FF5E9E7C854776CB2C2" data-pwa-rule-id="A_UNCOUNTABLE" data-pwa-category="grammar" data-pwa-hint="Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'news'." data-pwa-suggestions="news" data-pwa-heavy="false" data-pwa-dictionary-word="a news" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">a news</pwa> on crime and accidents. Urban population is mostly busy in its daily hectic routine and thus, has less time to spare and socialize. This <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-03E71F878E3466322F7EABE157285CB8" data-pwa-rule-id="READABILITY_210" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Readability may be enhanced by removing this" data-pwa-suggestions="(omit)" data-pwa-heavy="false" data-pwa-dictionary-word="in turn " class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">in turn </pwa>imparts a sense of materialism to the <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-59754B7855761659F96832E4234EEF0C" data-pwa-rule-id="SIMPLE_SPELLING" data-pwa-category="spelling" data-pwa-hint="Unknown word: cuty" data-pwa-suggestions="city" data-pwa-heavy="false" data-pwa-dictionary-word="cuty" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">cuty</pwa> life.
<pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-C2D4125AE9B90E3FAA97FFAC43BE15EE" data-pwa-rule-id="READABILITY_814" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Readability may be enhanced by using: Most" data-pwa-suggestions="Most" data-pwa-heavy="false" data-pwa-dictionary-word="Furthermore, most" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">Furthermore, most</pwa> of the issues mentioned above are not the concern of the people living in suburbs, serene environment, lack of traffic and eco-friendly atmosphere make up the best residential area. Thus, the government should introduce such reforms as those that are available in cultural hubs of the country, and this would eventually motivate the individuals to move away from the cities.
All things considered, <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-323F74C98969C5519CF30A081BE8F659" data-pwa-rule-id="PASSIVE_VOICE" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Passive verbs make your writing less direct. Try to use an active verb instead." data-pwa-suggestions="we can conclude it" data-pwa-heavy="false" data-pwa-dictionary-word="it can be concluded" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">it </pwa><pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-323F74C98969C5519CF30A081BE8F659" data-pwa-rule-id="PASSIVE_VOICE" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Passive verbs make your writing less direct. Try to use an active verb instead." data-pwa-suggestions="we can conclude it" data-pwa-heavy="false" data-pwa-dictionary-word="it can be concluded" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">can be</pwa><pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-323F74C98969C5519CF30A081BE8F659" data-pwa-rule-id="PASSIVE_VOICE" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Passive verbs make your writing less direct. Try to use an active verb instead." data-pwa-suggestions="we can conclude it" data-pwa-heavy="false" data-pwa-dictionary-word="it can be concluded" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done"> concluded</pwa> that the role of the government is undeniable, <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-48E85585719B5BF721770B38714930F4" data-pwa-rule-id="UNNECESSARY_COMMA_PWCE" data-pwa-category="grammar" data-pwa-hint="Possible unnecessary comma" data-pwa-suggestions="since" data-pwa-heavy="true" data-pwa-dictionary-word="since," class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">since,</pwa> the primary reason of relocation is the lack of reforms in small regional towns and abundance of amenities in metropolitan cities. <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-A716C2B08F03D074980E4F2559D2A488" data-pwa-rule-id="READABILITY_640" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Readability may be enhanced by using: To" data-pwa-suggestions="To" data-pwa-heavy="false" data-pwa-dictionary-word="In order to" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">In order to</pwa> galvanize people to move back, this problem has to <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-C7461C4C802C1025C158A6FD6C1D67D6" data-pwa-rule-id="PASSIVE_VOICE" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Passive verbs make your writing less direct. Try to use an active verb instead." data-pwa-suggestions="" data-pwa-heavy="false" data-pwa-dictionary-word="be addressed" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">be</pwa><pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-C7461C4C802C1025C158A6FD6C1D67D6" data-pwa-rule-id="PASSIVE_VOICE" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Passive verbs make your writing less direct. Try to use an active verb instead." data-pwa-suggestions="" data-pwa-heavy="false" data-pwa-dictionary-word="be addressed" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done"> addressed</pwa> and in a more appropriate way possible.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1964, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...data-pwa-hint='The punctuation mark . may require a space after it, not befor...
^^
Line 1, column 1967, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: May
...a-pwa-hint='The punctuation mark . may require a space after it, not before. C...
^^^
Line 1, column 2142, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...se' data-pwa-dictionary-word=' .' class='pwa-mark pwa-mark-don...
^^
Line 1, column 3169, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , &apos
...pos; data-pwa-dictionary-word='part,' class='pwa-mark pwa-mark-done&apo...
^^^^^^
Line 1, column 3222, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , ...='pwa-mark pwa-mark-done'>part, and encourage people to
Line 3, column 1928, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , &apos
...apos; data-pwa-dictionary-word='but,' class='pwa-mark pwa-mark-done&apo...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 1980, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , ...s='pwa-mark pwa-mark-done'>but, it comes with a price, since you c...
^^
Line 3, column 2021, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
... it comes with a price, since you cant set foot outside of your house, without...
^^^^
Line 5, column 706, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...aylife' data-pwa-suggestions='everyday life' data-pwa-heavy='false&a...
^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 1128, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ve verbs make your writing less direct. Try to use an active verb instead.' da...
^^^
Line 9, column 1737, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , &apos
...os; data-pwa-dictionary-word='since,' class='pwa-mark pwa-mark-done&apo...
^^^^^^
Line 9, column 1791, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , ...'pwa-mark pwa-mark-done'>since, the primary reason of relocation i...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, thus, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 13.1623246493 213% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 25.0 7.85571142285 318% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 24.0651302605 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 92.0 41.998997996 219% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 12814.0 1615.20841683 793% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 860.0 315.596192385 273% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 14.9 5.12529762239 291% => Less chars per word wanted.
Fourth root words length: 5.41532608411 4.20363070211 129% => OK
Word Length SD: 15.5306587373 2.80592935109 553% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 408.0 176.041082164 232% => Less unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.474418604651 0.561755894193 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 3396.6 506.74238477 670% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 3.9 1.60771543086 243% => Avg_syllables_per_word is high.
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 16.0721442886 156% => OK
Sentence length: 34.0 20.2975951904 168% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 465.547591552 49.4020404114 942% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 512.56 106.682146367 480% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 34.4 20.7667163134 166% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.36 7.06120827912 33% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.00903936302343 0.244688304435 4% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0108284508275 0.084324248473 13% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0208074916729 0.0667982634062 31% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.011658238976 0.151304729494 8% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0125851521144 0.056905535591 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 65.9 13.0946893788 503% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -157.61 50.2224549098 -314% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 22.9 7.44779559118 307% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 43.7 11.3001002004 387% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 69.73 12.4159519038 562% => Coleman_liau_index is high.
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.7 8.58950901804 125% => OK
difficult_words: 293.0 78.4519038076 373% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 49.5 9.78957915832 506% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.1190380762 154% => OK
text_standard: 23.0 10.7795591182 213% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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