People living in large cities today face many problems in their everyday life. What are these problems? Should governments encourage people to move to smaller regional towns?
Nowadays, many people would like to live in big cities where there are a lot of issues which citizens need to face, namely pollution and noisy problem. In my opinion, governments should deal with these problems by redistribution to smaller towns.
In large cities, individuals have to tackle many unpleasant problems such as environmental pollution and noisy problem. Firstly, when a large number of citizens live in a city, it means there are so many vehicles that release a huge amount of carbon dioxide. This gas pollutes the are and also impact human health directly, especially respiratory diseases. In addition, a crowded city may cause a problem with earth pollution. For example, the people live, the more trash there is. If the amount of litter is too much to process efficiently, it may store underground and affects the quality of ground and underground water. Last but not least, nowadays, most individuals in big cities spend their evening on entertainment activities. They are not only going to bar, club or karaoke but also do jogging in the roads of the city. Admittedly, the crowd is inevitable to make noise and disturb the sleep of others. Also, the aloud honk from vehicles are responsible for this issue.
To deal with these problems, it is beneficial to reduce the density of the population through the government's plan. People move to smaller neighbors as a result, the traffic jam and pollution are partly solved. Besides, it makes the evening more silent suiting to a night of good sleep. Finally, it also offers citizens a lot of other benefits for the heal.
In conclusion, people in crowded cities have to face a number of correctable problems in daily life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 135, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...lution and noisy problem. Firstly, when a large number of citizens live in a city, it means there...
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Line 3, column 349, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...rs citizens a lot of other benefits for the heal. In conclusion, people in crowded cit...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, first, firstly, if, may, so, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1406.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95070422535 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72610718513 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588028169014 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.1606778661 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 82.7058823529 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7058823529 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.88235294118 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.322588073273 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0873769448307 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0903461722057 0.0667982634062 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.217568665556 0.151304729494 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0863679649531 0.056905535591 152% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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