People living in large cities today face many problems in their everyday life. What are these problems? Should governments encourage people to move to smaller regional towns?
Nowadays, city dwellers have to confront many difficulties in their daily fife. Several harmful consequences have resulted from this tendency; therefore, the policy of governments to encourage residents to rural areas should be implemented owing to it’s several benefits.
First, as an excessive load of people live in metropolitans, many problems can be anticipated. Obviously, the most noticeable problem these people have to suffer is air pollution, which is a threat to their health. For examples, in HCM city, a great deal of emissions has been discharged into the atmosphere from vehicles and industrial zones, and the number of cases related to respiratory diseases is ever-increasing. Furthermore, the cost of living in metropolises is soaring than ever before, making people’s life more struggling. In fact, people from underprivileged background are working extremely hard to pay utility cost, especially the mortgage, and living in derelicts buildings with poor conditions. Traffic congestion, social problems, and dense population are also putting an enormous strain on people living in big cities.
As a result, governments should take responsibilities to give people incentives to promote rural migration due to the advantages this addressment has brought. First, an influx of people moving to countryside will cause urban population to shrink significantly, enabling to release pressure on urban housing and traffic systems. Although life in big cities is more dynamic and promising regarding job opportunities and personal growth, enduring too much stress from living space or commuting to work can take a toll on people’s mental health. Also, a reduction in population means the atmosphere will be less contaminated with exhaust fumes. People, especially the elderly should take their health into consideration when choosing a region to live.
In conclusion, national authorities should take actions to address problems faced by city dwellers, and one of the most effective solution is causing a migration to countryside.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 247, Rule ID: ABOUT_ITS_NN[25]
Message: Did you mean 'to its several'?
Suggestion: to its several
...rural areas should be implemented owing to it’s several benefits. First, as an excessive load ...
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Line 1, column 250, Rule ID: ITS_JJ_NNSNN[27]
Message: Did you mean 'its several benefits'?
Suggestion: its several benefits
...al areas should be implemented owing to it’s several benefits. First, as an excessive load of people...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, regarding, so, therefore, well, for example, in conclusion, in fact, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1746.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.66883116883 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18162602123 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62987012987 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 539.1 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.0711324321 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.714285714 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.85714285714 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.319427619389 0.244688304435 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0998347155174 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0570838007282 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165763932673 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0481651119609 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 50.2224549098 64% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.61 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.26 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.