It is true that people in urban areas can expect to seize the opportunity to have the better life and career advancement, but there are also some major drawbacks of living in a large metropolis. In my perspective, the migration to other areas is a vital measure which governments should implement to bolster the quality of life of all city residents.
The main problem for the populace in a large city is that the high rates of unemployment increasing dramatically sparks some badly societal issues. For example, in many industrialized nations, employers or international enterprises have a predisposition towards valuing formal academic qualifications above life experiences as well as personal qualities that render people be prone to become derelicts, as result, people begin to engage in unlawful acts such as robbery or smuggling as a way of earning their livelihood leading to considerable growth of crime rates in major cities nowadays. Another issue is that environmental pollution in cities is indigent, especially an air pollution, due to exhausted fumes and gas emissions from vehicles and manufacturing factories respectively, this is the cause of respiratory diseases like pulmonary tuberculosis or lung cancers that will shorten residents' life expectancy. In addition, the cost of living in urban areas is likely to be much higher than its rural counterparts. Inhabitants of cities have difficulty paying for their rent and utility bills.
To mitigate these problems, governments should impose the policy to encourage residents to relocate to small towns. In my opinion, municipal councils should provide pecuniary supports to those who are willing to live in rural areas and develop provincial towns by moving infrastructure, jobs, and schools to those regions together with investing more money in facilities, in order to not only attract more people to but also reduce the pressure on major cities. Furthermore, the rural life is tranquil ad beneficial for human health and frame of mind. Many small towns are less developed because of labour shortage so that this can tackle the unemployment. Consequently, the migration to rural areas is a great solution.
In conclusion, the city planners should pay attention to the well-being of the populace and individuals also should take the opportunities to change their life
- The media should include more stories which report good news. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 84
- Doyouagreethattheadvantagescarsbringoutweighthedisadvantages? 11
- Some people think that a huge a mount of time and money is spent on the protection of wild animals, and that this money could be better spent on the human population. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this opinion? 73
- Some people think that a huge a mount of time and money is spent on the protection of wild animals, and that this money could be better spent on the human population. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this opinion? 78
- Some people think it is more important to spend public money on promoting a healthy lifestyle in order to prevent illness than to spend it on the treatment for people who are already ill. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 78
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, if, so, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in my opinion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1971.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 368.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35597826087 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37987740619 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10528159862 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 176.041082164 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597826086957 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 640.8 506.74238477 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 113.694337444 49.4020404114 230% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 151.615384615 106.682146367 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.3076923077 20.7667163134 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6923076923 7.06120827912 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288481884128 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0824931622735 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0453760444854 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158263080382 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0157990866717 0.056905535591 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.0 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 50.2224549098 69% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.05 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 117.0 78.4519038076 149% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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