People naturally resist making changes in their lives.
What kind of problems can this cause? What solutions can you suggest?
It is challenging for a majority of individuals to change their habits in their lives, however, this could cause several problems. In this essay, I will outline the main cons of this phenomenon and draw some solutions.
It is obvious that each person has their own habits and routines then they have a tendency not to change them. By doing this, their creativity decreases, eventually decline any other offers that could change what they are accustomed to. For instance, some students tend to do the exercises in the same way. Once the question is changed, they could not do them competently like the way they do.
In addition, change resistance could also lead to a generation gap. Family members who do not keep up with innovations and modernization can bring personal and social problems could have contrary views, eventually conflicts. New ideas are often come up with by broader perspective, and it should be accepted for the development of the society besides the importance of old traditions.
Some solutions are drawn to solve the problems and make the lives better. It is true that old people cannot easily accept the rapid changes in their lives, therefore, younger people should talk to them, explain that there are countless advantages of changing the habits. If they feel difficult to change immediately, try to change a little bit first and remain old customs which can be used as foundations.
In conclusion, life always changes and individuals have to keep up with new ideas to improve themselves. From my point of view, this is a crucial problem for most societies for social development.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 334, Rule ID: LITTLE_BIT[1]
Message: Reduce redundancy by using 'little' or 'bit'.
Suggestion: little; bit
... to change immediately, try to change a little bit first and remain old customs which can ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, however, if, so, then, therefore, as to, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, it is true, in the same way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1341.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98513011152 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71678295158 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.602230483271 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 411.3 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.2246352486 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.7857142857 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2142857143 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.42857142857 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24938955788 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0792338190299 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0582532652441 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124521384974 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0597943652417 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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