people now have the freedom to live and work anywhere in the world due to the development of communication and transport.
what are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?
With the advent of technology, new innovations, and exceptional discoveries in the field of mobility and communication services have not only improved global connections but also enhanced the economic standards of a country. This essay will explain how extra-ordinary researchers have shown their blessings in easing out human life in many areas, but at the same time adverse effects it can have because of over-dependency.
Nowadays, it can be seen that numerous employment and growth opportunities are available for our upcoming generations irrespective of the location and remote areas due to many communication platforms such as skype, zoom, loom, and a fast-paced means of transportation. In addition, a sigh of big relief during unprecedented times such as COVID-19, as people from any profession could connect to their workplace while sitting anywhere in the world. For instance, video chats and treatment of patients while following COVID restrictions and transporting many stranded visitors to their home locations were possible only due to major development in these much-needed areas.
Turning to various cons associated with the given aspect, as per the current survey, the global temperature is rising due to an increase in pollution, where increasing demand for high-end and efficient mobility means is equally accountable. Moreover, the trend of a significant rise in phone scams results in losing valuable personal and professional data. For example, operating bank details from any place through mobile can be dangerous sometimes. Hence, it is an undeniable fact that any invention can be a boon to humanity if used unwisely and in a rampant way.
To conclude, the efficacy of new inventions in our day to day life has become an indispensable part of our living. Although human life has gained immensely out of these innovations, the negative impacts in terms of safety and environment can not be ignored at all.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider replacing "in a rampant way" with adverb for "rampant"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...a boon to humanity if used unwisely and in a rampant way. To conclude, the efficacy of new in...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...vironment can not be ignored at all.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, moreover, so, while, for example, for instance, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1643.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.40460526316 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15399807559 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.638157894737 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 522.9 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.4738172512 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 149.363636364 106.682146367 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.6363636364 20.7667163134 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.18181818182 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.115125589475 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0361636215194 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0320145954982 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0589109938307 0.151304729494 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.046946846113 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.8 13.0946893788 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.34 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.33 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 21.5 9.78957915832 220% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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