People nowdays work hard to buy more things. This has made our life generally more comfortable but it is a pity many traditional values have been lost on the way such materialism.To what extent do you agree or disagree.
It is certainly true that todays lifestyle has become more materialistic than ever. It is highly debated issue as to whether the growth of modern desiers which fulfill through hardworking and this replacing their culture values nd tradition is blessing or curse. I strongly agree with this notion due to some reasons.
Majority of the individuals gradually get disconnected from their primitive period first reason behind that is material possessions are tied to self worth. People beleive if they do not have the latest gadget or clothes of the newest fashion they just do not have an identity. They beleive that they shall not be accepted in the social circle. This carving may lead to adoption of unethical modes to earn money to fulfill their ever increasing demands. Due to this the value of tradition they always set on back seat and always prefer to run in rat race to become moderinization.
Moreover , as compairing with past tradition where had a great importance toward relationships , tolerance and respect. But in nowdays these values follow reverse pattern because in this era everybody wishes to assert their individuality and superiority with their buying power, there is a little place for respect and tolerance. For instance hindustan times conducted a survey and realized that above 80% people do not preseve their tradition equipments nd values and they need only high comfort zone.
In conclusion, I opine that the desire of having more things inevitably leadspeople to compromise with their culture ethics and principles.It take a lot of personal courage and conviction to save oneself such an outcome and maintain a balanced life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, moreover, so, as to, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1388.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17910447761 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74839771254 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.664179104478 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.5853084831 49.4020404114 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.181818182 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3636363636 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.27272727273 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170392312906 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0587526974836 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0355331222343 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0977683571751 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0105500971311 0.056905535591 19% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.72 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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