Some people work for the same organisation all their working life. Others think that it is better to work for different organisation. Discuss the both views and give your opinion.
In this era everybody get job based upon their knowldge or skills when they get their first job they have little idea whether or not they will remain in the same organisation. Majority of the indivisuals want to stay in same organisation while others are contradicts this arguement .This essay intend to analyse both view points before reaching to concrete opinion.
With regard to those who want to stay in same organisation reason behind is that the person know it brings various economic benefits. Whenever, employees have longer contact and experienced with organisation it will automatically increase the confidence of person to do well job at any situation because they suffer with certain type of problems and now they handle easily with great experience. So, it always help to attain high level promotion. Moreover, company also provide some extra reward and facilities to their workers . Employees also job security and confidence which is not easily provide to freshers.
However, one of the drawback of staying in same organisation is that the person mau get stuck doing the same job for long period. Due to this they loss their interest and workload take as burden it will also increase the stress level. So people prefer to do some another field work and enhance their knowldge which brings satisfaction to their mind.For instance hindustan times conducted a survey and realised that the person who do some extra interesting work they are live happy nd joyfuly as compare to others.
Although there are enormous benefits to do work in same organisation .But if employees have great knowldge regarding other fields it provide more staisfaction and wide range experience. As long as it planned carefuly.I feel that change is good and will ultimately benefit the employee nd employer.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, well, while, for instance, i feel, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1509.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13265306122 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66322050618 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581632653061 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 472.5 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.0030125967 49.4020404114 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.75 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.75 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210791473202 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0684045395144 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0671540528617 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125706106063 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.06614023559 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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