People prefer to use internet for daily works such as texting and shopping instead of face-to-face communication.
In recent days, people prefer to use internet for daily works such as texting and shopping instead of face-to-face communication. The major reason for this change is the flexibility to shop online and cost savings. This is definitely seen as a positive growth as it saves people time and money.
The Internet is a global tool. It had changed the way people shop. People don't have to spend their entire day shopping instead they get all in just one click. There are more virtual shops compared to traditional shops. The primary reason for the online shops is the flexibility they provide such as a variety of designs, filters to choose options, based on the need which is highly impossible in the real showrooms. Another added advantage is the reviews provided by the other customers, which helps to choose us based on the goodwill of the product which lags in traditional shopping. As a result, people prefer online shopping. A recent market survey by the Euro Fashion company has revealed that the sale of their products increased
almost to 70% after they hosted a virtual showroom.
Considering all the factors, online interaction is a good development as it saves huge money and time. Additionally, In the current era, younger generations are busy with multiple works, it is highly difficult to go to shops for purchase. hence online shopping is a boon to them. For example, they don't have to travel so long and wait in a queue to pick their favourite food, instead, there are multiple apps which helps them order food in a fraction of seconds and serve them at their doors.
To conclude, people prefer the internet to interact and this is a positive development.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, second, so, for example, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1392.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86713286713 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61554354253 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548951048951 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 56.2933166548 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.0 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.875 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 7.06120827912 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.36843246844 0.244688304435 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122091831391 0.084324248473 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.204853341111 0.0667982634062 307% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19752977364 0.151304729494 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.205675030684 0.056905535591 361% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.67 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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