The line graph depicts the amount of spreads namely Margarine, low fat & reduced spreads, and butter consumed between 1981 and 2007.

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The line graph depicts the amount of spreads namely Margarine, low fat & reduced spreads, and butter consumed between 1981 and 2007.

The line graph depicts the amount of spreads namely Margarine, low fat & reduced spreads, and butter consumed between 1981 and 2007. The units are measured in grams.

Overall, the consumption of low fat & reduced spreads experienced an increase over the recorded time, while the figures for butter and margarine witnessed a decrease. It is also clear that the low fat & reduced spreads consumption started only during mid 90's.

In 1981, butter is the most preferred spread with just above 140 grams and it increased to nearly 160 grams in next 5 years, but there was a sharp decline to nearly 50 grams in 2007. The figures for margarine fluctuated from around 80 grams to about 100 grams until 2001, before steadily decreasing to nearly a half at the end of period.

Although consumption of the low fat & reduced spreads started only in 1996 with just below 20 grams, then the amount climbed sharply to just above 80 grams in 2001, followed by a slight decline to just above 60 grams in 2007.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, so, then, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 828.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 172.0 196.424390244 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81395348837 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41356253097 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575581395349 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 229.5 283.868780488 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.4217599942 43.030603864 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.285714286 112.824112599 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5714285714 22.9334400587 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.71428571429 5.23603664747 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.380599061745 0.215688989381 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.214311979655 0.103423049105 207% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.304532067639 0.0843802449381 361% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.302511057622 0.15604864568 194% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.295207161366 0.0819641961636 360% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.2329268293 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.5 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 11.4140731707 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.4 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 40.7170731707 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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