The pie chart illustrates the five different types of energy production such as coal, gas, nuclear, petrol, and others in France for two years 1995 and 2005.

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The pie chart illustrates the five different types of energy production such as coal, gas, nuclear, petrol, and others in France for two years 1995 and 2005.

The pie chart illustrates the five different types of energy production such as coal, gas, nuclear, petrol, and others in France for two years 1995 and 2005.

Overall, there was an increase in the production of all sources except for petrol. Gas and coal is the primary source of energy in both the years whereas other and nuclear produce the least amount of energy.

Although there was a minimum rise in gas and coal production, they constitute more than half of energy production with 30.31% and 30.93% respectively in 2005. The other energy production was minimum with 4.9% in 1995 and the figures almost doubled in 2005 which makes up approximately 9%. The production of nuclear energy went up nearly 4% in 2005.

It is clear that energy production from petrol products takes up more than a quarter in 1995, but the percentage dropped to 10% in 2005.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, whereas, except for, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 716.0 965.302439024 74% => OK
No of words: 148.0 196.424390244 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83783783784 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.48791127476 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49491813661 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 88.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594594594595 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 204.3 283.868780488 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.4910517825 43.030603864 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.285714286 112.824112599 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1428571429 22.9334400587 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.85714285714 5.23603664747 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.598562465607 0.215688989381 278% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.293274738479 0.103423049105 284% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.290641436677 0.0843802449381 344% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.420114826054 0.15604864568 269% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.335437924283 0.0819641961636 409% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.2329268293 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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