As people rely more and more technology to solve a problem availability of human to thinks for themselve will surely deteriorate
Yes, I agree with the statement that people are using more and more technology such as phone, tablets, electronic gadgets are the most important part of human life. People are using technology to show this may of living or life style.
In previous time people use to spend more time to friends, family and relatives but advancement of technology people prefer spend more time on the phone or other services. It is creating social distance as well as time will come when no one have time for other people. Technology have created a gap and people forget the etiquette and good habits that they have before thinking ability of people will reduce because people prefer to use calculator for calculations and not their mind. Everything is done on phones rather than thinking of people
we can say that as people Technology should be use universal and judiciously and time management should be maintained to use electronic gadget.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 25, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...or life style. In previous time people use to spend more time to friends, family a...
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Line 2, column 202, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...services. It is creating social distance as well as time will come when no one ha...
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Line 2, column 545, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...on phones rather than thinking of people we can say that as people Technology sho...
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Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...say that as people Technology should be use universal and judiciously and time mana...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, well, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 41.998997996 36% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 771.0 1615.20841683 48% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 157.0 315.596192385 50% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91082802548 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53976893118 4.20363070211 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53376724851 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 176.041082164 54% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.605095541401 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 257.4 506.74238477 51% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.5155740572 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.5 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1666666667 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.16666666667 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267695918162 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137900868442 0.084324248473 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.059463557472 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169153256197 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0825146078572 0.056905535591 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 78.4519038076 43% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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