People's shopping habits depend more on the age group that they belong to than other factors. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Shopping has become an indispensable part of everyone's life. However, it is generally considered that age group is merely an essential shopping rather than others aspects. I disagree with the statement that gender, interest and money are an equally important to purchase things. This essay will explain my views in the upcoming paragraphs.
To start with, there are multifarious factors, which are necessary buying items. Although, people buy products according to their age group. For example, usually juveniles prefer purchasing toys, dolls and other small technological items, whereas adult buy necessary things like- household goods, vehicles and others more, yet shopping relies on gender difference. As, the women have distinct choices as compared to men. To explain it, females are brought household items, children's clothes and so on. While, the male gives priority to buy their own personal products, such as- alcohol, clothes and vehicles. Therefore, the interest of both sexes is different from buying something.
Money is another massive factor of consumer goods. To illustrate it, the preference of an affluent mass is more towards expensive products as they can afford it. By contrast, the poor and middle class individuals have to see their pockets. Besides this, peer pressure is another important element, which manipulates purchasing choices. Advertisement, which keep up to date the masses pertaining to new products, also affects consumerism.
In conclusion, after analysing all the aspects of the given statement, it is not hard to see that only age group does not crucial for buying, other aspects gender, financial status, family, friends and advertising equation.
- People s shopping habits depend more on the age group that they belong to then other factors To what extent do you agree or disagree 84
- People s shopping habits depend more on the age group that they belong to then other factors To what extent do you agree or disagree 56
- People s shopping habits depend more on the age group that they belong to than other factors To what extent do you agree or disagree 84
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, however, if, so, therefore, whereas, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, in my view, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1444.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.57528957529 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76124678958 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.694980694981 0.561755894193 124% => OK
syllable_count: 434.7 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.7772199535 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.9411764706 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2352941176 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.11764705882 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 3.4128256513 322% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158516528715 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0419850476999 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0571861764716 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0871648696826 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0333343197114 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.49 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.68 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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