People's shopping habits depend more on the age group that they belong to then other factors. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is said that resident’s purposes of purchase rely more on aging than other elements. In my opinion, I totally disagree with this statement with several reasons
Theoretically, matter determines consciousness, so living standard affects citizen’s behaviour in terms of purchase. To be more specific, individuals’ income would decide characteristics of items which they have bought such as: quality, brand or reason. Take a huge gap in economics between Africa and America for example, while the Africans tend to select the cheap and convenient items, the Americans concern about their quality. In the other word, affluence is the key factor of people’s shopping habits.
Furthermore, determination of purchaser depends on society tendency. To be more extent, thank for the development of social media, people could catch up the shopping market immediately. As the result, buyers would aware the products or clothes are being concerned widely, this outcome stimulates consumer’s curiosity and desire. For instance, BlackPink’s concert are witnessing an enormous increase in selling ticket in Viet Nam although the fact is the ticket price is unaffordable for some particular people, they attempt to attend in the concert, even more, some of them have not heard about those stars’ reputation, all because our community’s trend effect.
Take everything into account, by aforementioned ideas, I firmly believe that income and society is outweigh the age group that affects purchaser’s shopping behaviour.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 163, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...with this statement with several reasons Theoretically, matter determines conscio...
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Line 3, column 68, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'affects'' or 'affect's'?
Suggestion: affects'; affect's
...mines consciousness, so living standard affects citizen’s behaviour in terms of purchas...
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Line 3, column 228, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...of items which they have bought such as: quality, brand or reason. Take a huge ga...
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Line 7, column 100, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'outweighed'.
Suggestion: outweighed
...rmly believe that income and society is outweigh the age group that affects purchaser’s ...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, so, while, for example, for instance, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1301.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 229.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.68122270742 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08500372039 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.733624454148 0.561755894193 131% => OK
syllable_count: 399.6 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.6164191046 49.4020404114 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.1 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.7 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186582393073 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0740589935167 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0638248228594 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10195605632 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00702701911996 0.056905535591 12% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.96 12.4159519038 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.38 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 163, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...with this statement with several reasons Theoretically, matter determines conscio...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 68, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'affects'' or 'affect's'?
Suggestion: affects'; affect's
...mines consciousness, so living standard affects citizen’s behaviour in terms of purchas...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 228, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...of items which they have bought such as: quality, brand or reason. Take a huge ga...
^^
Line 7, column 100, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'outweighed'.
Suggestion: outweighed
...rmly believe that income and society is outweigh the age group that affects purchaser’s ...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, so, while, for example, for instance, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1301.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 229.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.68122270742 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08500372039 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.733624454148 0.561755894193 131% => OK
syllable_count: 399.6 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.6164191046 49.4020404114 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.1 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.7 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186582393073 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0740589935167 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0638248228594 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10195605632 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00702701911996 0.056905535591 12% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.96 12.4159519038 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.38 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.