People's shopping habits depend more on the age group that they belong to then other factors. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some people believe that the level of age in people would affect shopping routines more than others keys. I partly agree with this assertion; while it may be not true in the case of financial constraints, others seem to be affected by aging.
On the one side of the argument. Shopping routines, which are attached to the aging community, are divided into three elements, presenting for each mature period of one person in their life; elderlies, adults, and juveniles. Each stage will have a different style of shopping, characterized by the difference between their mindsets and priorities. Taking VietNam’s clothes as an example, the elderly seem inclined to the type of clothing, that belonged to the past, such as South Vietnamese pajamas as they completely grasped the concept of the former destiny. Comes to adults, these types of people prefer possessing polite clothes like a suit, which, in their opinion, will help enhance their appearance, making their manners look holistic and mature. The last element is minors, this is a complicated shopping group, those whose shopping routines are extremely influenced on the constant changes of the world, resonating with how they are conscious about themselves in terms of societies they belonged to. For instance, a group of juveniles can easily changes their styles, based on the fashionable trend around the world, which leads to a phenomenon in changing styles in the youngster.
On the other side of the argument, financial constraints also play an important role in making a decision of owing one product, Families with financial burdens would pay less attention in luxurious products, they prefer products that are suitable for their families's condition. For example, a person, whose salary is approximately 5 million per month, would not be engrossed by the trendy clothes with high prices. And for me, this factors will not be affected their shopping routines, even whatever age they are.
In conclusion, while it is true that aging would be crucial in buying a product, but finance also plays an intensive factor in mostly every period of a person.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, may, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1781.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 344.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1773255814 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68994324965 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578488372093 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 544.5 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.298766403 49.4020404114 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.0 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4615384615 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.53846153846 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176171186215 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0630564502032 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0643240916075 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109153531106 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0459390160252 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.47 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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