Nowadays, circumstance of women`s life in home and social activities is one of the most prominent challenges in whole of world. There are significant debates about women`s job out of home between social researchers in recent decades.
Some social experts claim that women can`t be successful in maternal and social activities simultaneously. Numerous countries in all over the world distinguished several months respite for mothers after childbirth to stay at home and concentrate on their new baby`s demands. Although this attitude is beneficial and appropriate for mothers and babies, many social planners emphasize that mothers should stay at home forever to take care of their children as best as they can. Recent investigations in Middle East countries illustrated that more than three forth of people are unanimous in advantages of remaining mothers at home after their childbirth. As social experts` opinion, because of the importance of parental responsibility, governments should support mothers by eliminating their financial issues and give salary to them. They believe that this approach can influence on increasing the population of developed countries to distribute their developments.
On the other hand, some human right activists argue that women should be involve in social activities as effective members. Hence, they are disagree with mothers` restricted activities at home and insist that mothers can fulfill their maternal and social activities properly because they are very powerful. According to last researches in U.K. more than 60% of mothers got depressed and isolated after 5 years remaining at home. Social researchers in developed countries believe that because of same rights for men and women, mothers can decide for their lifestyle by their own.
In conclusion, it is obvious that sometime women are more victorious in comparison with men and it reveal that there is not a direct relationship between success and gender. In my point of view, in contemporary century with several technological improvements there is not a particular difference between men and women. I believe that governments and people can devise some profitable plans to fabricate a reasonable balance for women` s activities.
- Some people think that the government should invest money in arts and culture events, while others believe that the government should spend money on more important things. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 73
- Some people believe that it is better to live and work in a vertical city with multiple tall buildings, as compared to a horizontal city with fewer tall buildings. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 73
- Life in the 21st century is better than the previous century. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons and support with relevant examples. 78
- In the modern world it is no longer necessary to use animals for food clothing or medicine To what extent do you agree or disagree Give reasons for your answer and include examples from your own experience 77
- Many people keep dogs and cats as companions.Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of pet ownership for the animals involved and for the community as a whole. 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 175, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'months'' or 'month's'?
Suggestion: months'; month's
...ll over the world distinguished several months respite for mothers after childbirth to...
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Line 3, column 74, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'involved'?
Suggestion: involved
...ht activists argue that women should be involve in social activities as effective membe...
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Line 3, column 141, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'disagreed'.
Suggestion: disagreed
...s as effective members. Hence, they are disagree with mothers' restricted activitie...
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Line 4, column 100, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'reveals'?
Suggestion: reveals
...ictorious in comparison with men and it reveal that there is not a direct relationship...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, so, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1927.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 343.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.61807580175 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11989317019 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542274052478 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 605.7 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.7313997803 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 128.466666667 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8666666667 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.46666666667 7.06120827912 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.383053872048 0.244688304435 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131389831812 0.084324248473 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0697834272502 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.220797058934 0.151304729494 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.111479957049 0.056905535591 196% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 50.2224549098 64% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.61 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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