People should be at least 21 years old before they are allowed to drive a car.To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In modern epoch,driving car becomes a craze among the youngsters.Masses must be 21 years old when they drive car.I.Strongly.agree with the notion as it reduces the death rate and they safe costly life.
To begin with,it helps to decline traffic congestion.As many of the youth prefer to go outside by their personal vehicle and it creates problem for others which further leds to long traffic jams.To illustrate,learning centre going scholars often go to school as well tution by their own bike.This creates huge traffic on the roads and whole thing becomes messy .Hence they reach late at their destination.In addition to this,it reduces the death rate.When youngsters not given bikes by their guardians,their will be less accidents who cause deaths of many passengers due to negligence.Reultantly,they become responsible citizen.
Moving further,They save not their life but also other too.aAs age limit will be raised.their will be lesser miss happenings which helps to ruin someones home.For instance,.many of the underage riders often hit someone which cause trouble for them as well as for their guardians.When they will not allowed to ride.Then their will be no difficulty.As a result they live their life happily .Moreover,they start racing on the roads. Many of individuals start doing racing with friends and they do reckless driving on roads to compete in race to win.Hence.They hurt themselves as well as others.
To conclude,driving at younger age must be obliged.if driving must be permitted after 21 years then it declines the accident ratio.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, moreover, so, then, well, for instance, in addition, as a result, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1317.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 246.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35365853659 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.49891393213 2.80592935109 125% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.626016260163 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 385.2 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 49.0 20.2975951904 241% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 191.061874795 49.4020404114 387% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 263.4 106.682146367 247% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 49.2 20.7667163134 237% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 22.6 7.06120827912 320% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 40.0 5.01903807615 797% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199533153752 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.136596634874 0.084324248473 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0721968104888 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148794332398 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0763281845624 0.056905535591 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 28.4 13.0946893788 217% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 21.74 50.2224549098 43% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.4 11.3001002004 198% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.64 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.43 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 9.78957915832 291% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 21.6 10.1190380762 213% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 29.0 10.7795591182 269% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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