People should follow customs and traditions when people start to live in a new country. To what extent do you agree or disagree.
Some people claim that adapting to native’s customs and traditions is crucial when foreigners come to live a new country. In my point of view, I totally agree with this view.
On the one hand, if newcomers cannot integrate with their host country, they might have to encounter some unexpected troubles. Firstly, the differences in sets of social norms among countries may lead to a great deal of serious misunderstanding that poses negative effects on a relationship. For instance, hugging a woman as a greeting is a very normal act in Western countries but it is a taboo in Muslim countries. Secondly, immigrants can unconsciously engage in illegal activities if they do not respect the customs or traditions of locals. In Thailand, for example, people can be sentenced to several years in prison if they are deliberately nude in spiritual places like pagodas and temples.
On the other hand, expatriates can reap several benefits when they adjust the way they live to fit IN the local community. These adjustments are likely to reduce cultural conflicts and help them quickly settle down in/integrate into the new setting. As a result, they can easily overcome culture shock to get on well with their neighbors and their colleagues as well as make new friends. Moreover, when business people move to a new country to do a start-up, understanding indigenous traditions and customs is one of the key factors ensuring that they can successfully penetrate a new market. For example, Mc Donald a global fast food chain has had to change their standard menu when they enter the countries which have a predominantly Muslim population.
In conclusion, I believe that people should follow the culture of the host country to avoid unexpected problems and take potential advantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1491.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08873720137 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97021287084 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60409556314 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.9347570942 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.692307692 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5384615385 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.6923076923 7.06120827912 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251670761897 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0845092147212 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0966814177228 0.0667982634062 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165161193589 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0670110037495 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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