People should follow native customs and traditions when starting to live in a new country. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Many a person holds the opinion that foreigners should not push against the prevailing manners and culture of local people if they immigrate to another country. Personally, I partially concur with this notion, and this essay is aimed at providing compelling justification for my position.
On the one hand, there are a number of different explanations to be taken into account as to why foreigners should learn how to comply with traditional and cultural manners/norms as a local resident in general. For one thing, this might result in immigrants easily living in harmony with local people. By and large, comprehending their culture enables them/newcomers/new arrivals to have polite and standard manners and attitudes in social communication and activities on the grounds that each country has its own culture which is worth being respected and followed by not only natives but also immigrants. For another, the fact that it will be an advantage in work and social relations if immigrants are able to go native deserves consideration. A lot of local corporations have preferential internal recruitment policies with foreign employees, with the result that foreigners may have a good condition along with their professional knowledge to take the opportunity to get promoted in work.
On the other hand, it is not compulsory for immigrants to change all their domestic motherland(‘s)/home country(‘s) culture when moving to another country for several reasons. To begin with, granted that all in all every culture is deserving of respect, and the motherland one is no exception, it is understandable and approving/acceptable for foreigners to maintain their cultural identity providing that it is appropriate for moral standards and does not infringe the social norms as well as the law of the local/host country. Another important factor for this is that maintaining their own culture is a requisite way for immigrants to pass down it to the next generations. Given the fact that they can sustain their customs and traditions after settling down in another nation, their children, grandchildren, great-grandchildren will not lose their culture.
In conclusion, I take the position that while to some extent immigrants should assimilate into the new culture when settling down in another nation, they should not be forced to abandon their own cultural origin for the reasons mentioned above.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...harmony with local people. By and large, comprehending their culture enables them...
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..., granted that all in all every culture is deserving of respect, and the motherland one is ...
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...l every culture is deserving of respect, and the motherland one is no exception, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, well, while, as to, in conclusion, in general, as well as, by and large, for one thing, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2028.0 1615.20841683 126% => OK
No of words: 377.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.37931034483 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4064143971 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.25495643548 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538461538462 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 620.1 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 73.6524778945 49.4020404114 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 169.0 106.682146367 158% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.4166666667 20.7667163134 151% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0 7.06120827912 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.107605793598 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0436065883548 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0384175507987 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0731000504591 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0302515358278 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.6 13.0946893788 150% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.01 50.2224549098 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.52 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.61 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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