People spend a lot of money on various things as they earn more money nowadays than before.
Is it a positive or negative development?
Today, the ways of earning money have changed in many countries and many individuals can get money more than before. One of the most noticeable usage of money is spending it! Reasonably, earning more money result in spending more. However, this advancement could potentially produce advantages as well as drawbacks. In my point of view, the good points of this issue surpass the bad ones which I discuss in the following.
Rising cash follow is the most important impact of the so-called phenomenon, and this can remarkably influence on the economic growth in every country. For example, when people earn more money, they can buy more merchandises. More consumption made factories to produce more and more goods. Inevitably, factories have to expand their maximum productivities, and this practically provide more job vacancies. All of which appropriately help for industry and economic burgeoning.
The other advantages of this development is letting people live easier than previous. Buying different thing which make their daily life more convenient is absolutely beneficial. A case in point is utensils we make use of them in the kitchen. These utilities help us speed up cooking and efficiently set up more recreational time.
On the other hand, one of the negative effects of paying much money on purchases is the danger of consumerism. These days, a group of people could not stand up to buying different things. They seem to be waiting for new goods to purchase with no regard to their requirements. Pursuing this habit can adversely affect their family and professional life, since they are encircled with an infinite amount of products. If they don’t manage their purchases, they inevitably encounter monetary issues.
To sum up, I think that increasing in earning and spending money by individuals has its own boons as well as disadvantages. However, I do believe that the positive effects like growing currency flow and enhancing the quality of people’s life exceed its disadvantages such as the phenomenon of consumerism.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1728.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26829268293 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96666081112 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594512195122 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 541.8 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.6879047835 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.4 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.7 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.33760622407 0.244688304435 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0898672404545 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10048991225 0.0667982634062 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167960658834 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0650917149277 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.99 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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