The Consumerism culture has become a predominant phenomenon of the current era. The much people earn the more they squander enormous money for return of diverse services or items than ever before. I heartedly believe this is a disadvantageous tendency because it impose social as well as environmental deleterious impacts on society.
To begin with, spending money unwisely on purchasing items that are not needed has urged, in one way or another, the throw-away trend globally. For instance, women 's drawrobes, for example, are over cramped with clothes that have never been used, yet they ceaselessly complain of the lack of the appropriate outfits for different occasion and continue to buy more. This example highlights the detrimental effect of buying things without any common sense which, most often than not, will end up discarded sooner or later to the evironment.
Additionally, it is a commonplace nowadays for a sector in society to obtain possessions to attain a certain social image ; people endeavor to imitate the rich who are thought by many to be the society's trend setter.This is witnessed in the YouTubers` srategies by wich they persuade the laymen that not only can they experience more happiness by having the advertised products, but thay can also lead a far fulfilling life if they follow them .As a result, people may commit crimes ,work for limitless hours, or eventually get trapped in a cycle of disenchantment if they could not save the needed money.
In conclusion,I restate my viewpoint that the ever increasing tendency to weast one`s salary on different aspects even if they are not nececccary is not welcomed development.Therefore, gonernmets around the globe have to shade light on such thoney issue.
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 85, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...nant phenomenon of the current era. The much people earn the more they squander enor...
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Line 1, column 264, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'imposes'?
Suggestion: imposes
...s a disadvantageous tendency because it impose social as well as environmental deleter...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 217, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: This
...by many to be the societys trend setter.This is witnessed in the YouTubers' sra...
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Line 5, column 449, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... far fulfilling life if they follow them .As a result, people may commit crimes ,w...
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Line 5, column 451, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: As
...ar fulfilling life if they follow them .As a result, people may commit crimes ,wor...
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Line 5, column 488, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...m .As a result, people may commit crimes ,work for limitless hours, or eventually ...
^^
Line 7, column 14, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , I
... save the needed money. In conclusion,I restate my viewpoint that the ever incr...
^^
Line 7, column 180, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Therefore
... nececccary is not welcomed development.Therefore, gonernmets around the globe have to sh...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1475.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2304964539 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09480527265 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.677304964539 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 20.2975951904 172% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 157.892368403 49.4020404114 320% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 184.375 106.682146367 173% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.25 20.7667163134 170% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.125 7.06120827912 214% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.67935871743 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215543990345 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0795166250984 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0854530245932 0.0667982634062 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113619500526 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0559477675352 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.8 13.0946893788 159% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 27.49 50.2224549098 55% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.1 11.3001002004 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.65 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.52 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.1190380762 158% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 85, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...nant phenomenon of the current era. The much people earn the more they squander enor...
^^^^
Line 1, column 264, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'imposes'?
Suggestion: imposes
...s a disadvantageous tendency because it impose social as well as environmental deleter...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 217, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: This
...by many to be the societys trend setter.This is witnessed in the YouTubers' sra...
^^^^
Line 5, column 449, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... far fulfilling life if they follow them .As a result, people may commit crimes ,w...
^^
Line 5, column 451, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: As
...ar fulfilling life if they follow them .As a result, people may commit crimes ,wor...
^^
Line 5, column 488, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...m .As a result, people may commit crimes ,work for limitless hours, or eventually ...
^^
Line 7, column 14, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , I
... save the needed money. In conclusion,I restate my viewpoint that the ever incr...
^^
Line 7, column 180, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Therefore
... nececccary is not welcomed development.Therefore, gonernmets around the globe have to sh...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1475.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2304964539 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09480527265 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.677304964539 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 20.2975951904 172% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 157.892368403 49.4020404114 320% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 184.375 106.682146367 173% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.25 20.7667163134 170% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.125 7.06120827912 214% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.67935871743 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215543990345 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0795166250984 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0854530245932 0.0667982634062 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113619500526 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0559477675352 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.8 13.0946893788 159% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 27.49 50.2224549098 55% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.1 11.3001002004 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.65 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.52 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.1190380762 158% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.