People today do not feel safe either at home or when they are out. What are the causes? What are the solutions?
It is true that nowadays people are unsafe even at home or outside. There are various causes to this situation, and I believe that this situation will be solved with some proposed solutions.
At least, there are two important causes why people are worrying about their life even where they are. Firstly, that is come from the advanced technology which is applied to our daily activities such as smart phone, surveillance camera, GPS equipment, etc… These gadgets are seen as controlling equipments that are controlling all kind of communication activities. For example, a hacker could access to any smartphone to stole the user data and sell to any person who needs this kind of information. Secondly, the food people are eating today is not safe as before. There are many poison chemicals are put to the food to keep food always fresh, but when people eat these kind of food, our body could have some problem in near future. A sample for this is transforming fruit and meat could make some adverse impact on our health but they are sold in many supermarkets without any control government.
However, these unsafe feeling could be diminished if people pay more time to care about themselves. The first thing needs to do is using the advanced technology equipment smartly. When access to the Internet, people should do not click to unknown website or chat with hidden person; only by doing these actions, are people protected from attacking of hackers. And to defend to illegal food, each person when buying food from supermarket or eating outside should check carefully all type of foods before deciding eat them. This will reduce the harmful agents going to our body.
In conclusion, we are living in an unsafe and fluctuation world, anything we do could damage ourselves. Therefore, let’s think that only us could protect ourselves before undefinitely risk.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 665, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
... food always fresh, but when people eat these kind of food, our body could have some probl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, at least, for example, in conclusion, kind of, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1560.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56442305689 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608974358974 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.9264519714 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.0 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.86666666667 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162130523382 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0582493268873 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0584973581321 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0904742175787 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0390496509265 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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