In the present days, people always tend to move to bigger cities and foreign countries for their career growth and for a better life as well.However these people may experience some challenges in their new living zone.This essay examines those challenges and the possible way outs to meet these challenges
There are many problems put forward in terms of the challenges people suffer in bigger cities and abroad countries .First of all,the cost of living is too high in these cities and people who are new to the cities cannot afford the huge rent ,water and electrical charges in the cities. Another important issue is language barrier people often do not the language which is used in bigger cities .This makes their life in other countries more complicated. Moreover,they are totally unaware of the rules in the new country, ignorance about the laws cause them end up in the jail.Finally,the crime rates are too high in cities ,the people who live in villages not aware of the strategies criminals follow in the cities, so it is for the criminals to trap them.
However , with some well planned strategies, people could avoid these problems. First and foremost is before migrating to another countries people should learn the local language which is in use there.This avoids the language barrier people face abroad. In addition, people should spend some time to learn the rules of the country,which they are planing to stay.Avoid strangers when they reach new places,ask help in the police aid posts.This will help to avoid the criminal attacks against them.Thus, if planned properly we can avoid the difficulties in new places at a certain level.
To conclude, the problems migrants face the visiting country will soar in the future as well.But the respective governments and individual can do some great things to avoid these problems which is mentioned above.
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'finally', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'moreover', 'so', 'thus', 'well', 'in addition', 'first of all']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.26706231454 0.247107183377 108% => OK
Verbs: 0.151335311573 0.155533422707 97% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0860534124629 0.0946595960268 91% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0504451038576 0.0501214627716 101% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0296735905045 0.0437548338989 68% => OK
Prepositions: 0.109792284866 0.122226691241 90% => OK
Participles: 0.0207715133531 0.0403226058552 52% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.623080538 2.80594681477 93% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0326409495549 0.0326793684256 100% => OK
Particles: 0.00296735905045 0.00163938923432 181% => Less particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.127596439169 0.0861772015684 148% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.026706231454 0.021408717616 125% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0237388724036 0.011925033212 199% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1884.0 1933.35771543 97% => OK
No of words: 310.0 316.048096192 98% => OK
Chars per words: 6.07741935484 6.12580529183 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20517956788 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.38064516129 0.374742101984 102% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.245161290323 0.28420135186 86% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.174193548387 0.203846283523 85% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.11935483871 0.137316102897 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.623080538 2.80594681477 93% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.037074148 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545161290323 0.56093040696 97% => OK
Word variations: 57.0640058002 60.7387585426 94% => OK
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0891783567 44% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 44.2857142857 20.7743622355 213% => Sentence lengths are too long.
Sentence length SD: 155.889023844 49.517814964 315% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 269.142857143 127.492653851 211% => Less chars per sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 44.2857142857 20.7743622355 213% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.71428571429 0.814263465372 211% => Less Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 29.0 3.99599198397 726% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 68.801843318 49.1944974215 140% => OK
Elegance: 1.71794871795 1.69124875643 102% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222108488739 0.332605444948 67% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.164900917375 0.102741220458 161% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0924543243705 0.0668466124924 138% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.745755552593 0.534860350844 139% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.232746091419 0.148594505496 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121695775918 0.134430193775 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0634076440771 0.0742795772207 85% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.426040442014 0.324371583561 131% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0521172209631 0.0638462369009 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173159303888 0.228012699653 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0762257000987 0.058150111329 131% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.68436873747 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.41683366733 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 2.0 5.90881763527 34% => OK
Negative topic words: 5.0 2.5751503006 194% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 1.9629258517 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 7.0 10.4468937876 67% => OK
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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