People who read for pleasure have better imagination and language skills than those who prefer watching T.V. To what extent do you agree?
There are a lot of benefits from reading rather than just watching television. it will enhanced and broaden your thinking as well as exemplify your communication skills. therefore I agree that it is essential to read numerous of novels instead of investing your time sitting infront of the t.v.
To begin with, novels are created from the wide imaginations and experineces of the authors therefore reading books would bring something interesting from your imagination. For instance, you have read a novel that described the beauty of the city of Paris, for a reader who haven't travel to that city, with the way the author depicts abbout that city you will be able to visualize and appreciate that place.
Moreover, extensive book readers tend to develop better linguistic skills that were resulted from continous and consistent reading of novels. The more words encountered the broader and stronger the language of a person's becomes. Justfor an example, while reading a book, you encountered an unfamiliar word, a person will instantly become curious hence he will scan the dictionary to find meaning of that certain word thus the person's vocabulary will be widened and give him more confidence as well when it comes to speaking and interaction.
However, people who spend most of their time watching television have limited to lesser development of their creative thinking as well as their communication skills. shows that are being broadcast mostly are for entertainment that showcases limited logic & creativity as well as the words being used like for example the slang words that are being used in comedy shows that are not necessary significant in daily life.
In conclusion, more people can benefit a lot from reading books and novels rather than watching television. I definitely agree that we can develop number of skills with engaging ourselves in reading which in the long run becomes more functional and essential.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1636.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2268370607 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72646621044 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555910543131 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 502.2 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 82.7277722263 49.4020404114 167% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.727272727 106.682146367 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.4545454545 20.7667163134 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.9090909091 7.06120827912 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22042159964 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0815166358762 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.050059406703 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113577962135 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0319715451981 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.0946893788 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.