In the present time, how much worthy a person is is depend on their valuable possession and their public status which is different to the past, that is determine by values like honor and kindness. Personally, I totally disagree with the above statement.
The first reason is related to the human natures on their judgement of the people around them. The attitude seems to be the most important attribute a person could have, which will help in their living. People that are kind to other will receive the same treatment if they would get into any hard situations. It is the same for those chose to be loyal but the difference is that person who you wish to respect mush have a good personality and leading skill, otherwise this won,t benefit you in any ways, and even cause you more trouble. Furthermore, other attribute like generosity and trustful will also make us more socially acceptable.
Another reason could be seen when their consequences catch up with their bad attitude which could be and hard to tackle. The after effects are that these people will certainly gain less respect and loyalty or targeted as a burden in workplace or their heritage. This usually apply to rich and powerful people such as politicians, president and kind in which their mindset and attribute would have a massive impact on the country. If not, people would started an impeachment or other method in removing these people as they are greedy and do not care for the wellbeing of their citizen. Other occupations like doctors, nurse or even a farmer should try their best to impersonate their fellows or their friend.Even thought they are not rich or popular, they should certainly gain much respect despite their social class.
In conclusion, most people are aware of other's personality and values which are still deep-rooted in their brain since their part. Such value like kindness, loyal and generosity will certainly have an impact on their daily life despite their classes.Thus,I am totally disagree with the mentioned opinion.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: is
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Suggestion: determined
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Message: Consider using 'the surrounding people'?
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'disagreed'.
Suggestion: disagreed
...despite their classes.Thus,I am totally disagree with the mentioned opinion.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, so, still, thus, well, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1689.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 340.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96764705882 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5294989725 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.529411764706 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 520.2 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.6442445849 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.642857143 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2857142857 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.71428571429 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138193240708 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0554059571732 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0404745173047 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0988258639308 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0332689507049 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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