The pictures below shows the recycling process wasted glass bottles. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features , and make comparisons where relevant.
?A glance at tge picture provides an illustration of how wasted glasses are recycled.
Overall,it is clear from the given data is that, there are three big stages starting with collecting the bottles and ending with sending them to supermarket. From the given process all steps are linked to each other respectively.
Looking at the information in more detail, the supplied process commences with gathering dissipated bottles in warehouse. Then,they are delivered to the next point by special transport. The process comes to the next stage in which the bottles are separated into three different sorts as green,brown and clear with the help of high-pressure water. And the bottles are transmitted to the factory that they broken to pieces. Afterwards, the pieces are burned in furnace under a temperature about 600-800c. In the next phasa, the recycled and new liquid glasses are shaped in a glass mould. Once,the final stage has been completed, the bottled drinks are dispatches.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 6.0 24.0651302605 25% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 834.0 1615.20841683 52% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 158.0 315.596192385 50% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27848101266 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.54539209256 4.20363070211 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78181657285 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 176.041082164 58% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.645569620253 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 248.4 506.74238477 49% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.9711642426 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.4 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.8 7.06120827912 25% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159528738803 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0576372548323 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0442978894696 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100477265984 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0413882630728 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.