Foreign visitors should pay more than local visitors for cultural and
historical attractions. To what extent do you agree or disagree with
this opinion?
Foreign visitors should pay more than local visitors for cultural and
historical attractions. To what extent do you agree or disagree with
this opinion?
It is sometimes argued that foreigners who visit to historical and cultural attractions should pay more than local people. Personally I completely disagree with this opinion.
Firstly, imposing higher prices for foreign tourists might abate the touristic attractiveness of one particular area. Inequality in terms of prices makes tourists disillusioned and falters their enthusiasm to touristic place and it's historical background. So ,most of the visitors withhold to go such kind of places and encourages others to not go by reasoning inequality , volatility in costs. As a result, this situation might sow fallout in the amount tourists who pay a visit.
Secondly , as the waves of tourists and visitors packes in , the economy may become ravaged as well. In some states where optimization of fiscal is related to tourism and budget sources are highly reliant on visitors, this trend would become as a backfire and serve as a catalyst to numerous incidences like high levels of redundancy, bankruptcy or recession. As a result of outstripping prices for visitors which are come from abroad ,countries which are dependent on tourism industry, might be left with the legacy of deprivation, huge economic difficulties, and even high rates of crimes. Therefore , authorities should veto this amendment due to it's disadvantages that might bring.
In conclusion , I reckon that imposing high prices to foreigners visitors for visiting historical and cultural sites is too ominous trend as well as misguided action. So states should eschew potential problems that it may cause.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, i reckon, in conclusion, kind of, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1473.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45555555556 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96898346407 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588888888889 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.3113541802 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.214285714 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2857142857 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.07142857143 7.06120827912 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.477080333809 0.244688304435 195% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.167280209077 0.084324248473 198% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.17523246614 0.0667982634062 262% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.306178833223 0.151304729494 202% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.186740861362 0.056905535591 328% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.08 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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