The plans below show a student room for two people and a student room for one person at an Australian university.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
Two plans are shown, the first one is related to a student room for a pair of students and the second one is for a room with a single student. Generally, the room for two people is much larger and has more facilities than the room for a single student.
The student room for two people is 150 dollars per week more than the room for one individual, at 350 dollars a week.The room for two people has two beds with two study desks. The two student compartments are separated by two cupboards.Next to student desk one, located on the left hand side of the room, there is a book shelf and there is also a small window next to bed one. Apart from that, this room has a table and chairs for more convenience.Study desk 2 is located near to the kitchen,followed by another bed and window.
The student room for one person has only one bed, but it has much larger windows for a better view. It also has a study desk.Both rooms have attached bathrooms of the same size to the left of the door as you enter.Moreover, the kitchen area is also similarly equipped. Both rooms have a sink, a stove and a microwave for cooking,located to the right of the door. A television is also available in both rooms. The rent is paid weekly and it amounts to two hundred dollars for the room with one student and three hundred and fifty dollars for the room with two people.Lastly, both rooms have the same length of six meters, but their width is different.The room for two people has a width of four meters and the room for a single person has a width of only two and a half meters.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, lastly, moreover, second, similarly, so, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1267.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.29491525424 5.12529762239 84% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60485040244 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.427118644068 0.561755894193 76% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 387.0 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 11.0 2.52805611222 435% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 85.3023446337 49.4020404114 173% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.7 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.5 20.7667163134 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.3 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 23.0 5.01903807615 458% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.433092598293 0.244688304435 177% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.216311440694 0.084324248473 257% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.139639847817 0.0667982634062 209% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.367833600786 0.151304729494 243% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0582796140384 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.42 50.2224549098 134% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.19 12.4159519038 66% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.0 8.58950901804 81% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 78.4519038076 46% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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