Planting trees is very important for the environment. Some people say trees should be planted in the vacant areas of cities and towns, while others say housing facilities should be build instead.
As from few decades the human population has become increased all over the world to such an extreme extent. so there is a high need of planting trees in order to fulfill the oxygen needs of the growing population. Apart from that as with the increase of population as well as industries, there has become an accompanying increase of pollution and the ozone layer depletion. In these circumstances the trees are definitely the need of hour. Because the trees act as the environmental filters and decrease the pollution level. so I'm quite inclined towards this view that plants should be planted in the vacant areas of cities and town. While on the other hand some people says that in that vacant spaces housing facilities should b build instead. I'm not agree with this view. Although, with the increase of population the need of housing facilities has become drastically increased as well. But it does not mean that to fulfill the housing needs we should neglect the need of planting trees. which is the other Necessity of life. And vital for the existence of the living beings. so, we can adress this problem by controlling population level. instead of destroying the existing trees n building houses all over the vacant spaces at the cost of destroying precious lives.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, well, while, apart from, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1056.0 1615.20841683 65% => OK
No of words: 217.0 315.596192385 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.866359447 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60916596487 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 176.041082164 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557603686636 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 317.7 506.74238477 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.8249713388 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.4285714286 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.78571428571 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.334957887298 0.244688304435 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102405662336 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.124301923181 0.0667982634062 186% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.334957887298 0.151304729494 221% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.0946893788 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.67 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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