Pollution of rivers, lakes and seas is a major concern for people who seek to protect the environment. What are the possible causes of water pollution? What effects does this have on animal life and human society?
Contamination of water resources is one of the tremendous challenges for humans who search in order to preserve the ecosystem. However, there are numerous reasons including industry, humans activity which can be considered the main causes of it. As a result, biodiversity and humans' life encounter with hazard.
Initially,the biggest threat to pollution of water resources is industry. Emissions are released into air from factories and vehicles. Therefore, water source s become unprofitable for utilizing. Moreover, humans activities endanger to this issue, they throw some rubbish to water and it results the pollution of water. For instance, in our country the river called Kur has been polluted by humans activities and today our government efforts to tackle this problem.
However, the detrimental effects of water pollution can be diminished by taking preventative measures. Firstly, government must allocate to clean polluted water and try to provide people with pure water. Secondly, some challenges made by humans can be solved to organize informative events and the people must be informed how they deteriorate healthy life.
In conclusion, nevertheless water pollution is crucial issue for living species and people, it is plausible to decrease this challenge by taking preventative measures
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1110.0 1615.20841683 69% => OK
No of words: 197.0 315.596192385 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.6345177665 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98142877143 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 176.041082164 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.624365482234 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 357.3 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.5539496165 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.5 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4166666667 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26222947721 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0971107739481 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0436829685087 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155337627229 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0279673058966 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.31 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.08 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.64 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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