Polygamy has lead to massive divorce rate around the globe. Give possible solution and discuss the reasons behind the issue.
Nowadays, The crisis of polygamy that leads to divorce has become a long running dispute among the public all over the world. It is undoubtedly the case of polygamy which is affected the society. In this essay, I shall explore the possible reasons for this trend and gives some of the practical policies to reducing this problem.
To begin this, it is a common problem in society. The families are not safe and secure because of polygamy. The first and foremost reason is misunderstanding in married couples. Sometimes the partners cannot understand the feelings, emotions of each other. The solution of this is matching views with one another and co-operation play dominant role to handle a married life. Secondly, the main cause is under family pressure people agree to each other but in some situations people have some other relationships. People can slove this problem through provide authority to younger to take their own decisions.
One of the causes of this could be uneducated people. If men have more knowledge and skills and women have lack of knowledge so, thinking of both people will be different. Moreover, marriage should in equal level of person. This helps to easily survive in their life. They can aware about their future if married couples are more qualified.
Overall, it is evident that polygamy creates for many different reasons. It only reduced through government. If government make policies, strategies and counseling than it helps to aware people in this field.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, moreover, second, secondly, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1255.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 246.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10162601626 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63058388533 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.617886178862 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 398.7 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.7819053263 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.7222222222 106.682146367 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.6666666667 20.7667163134 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.55555555556 7.06120827912 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0858088870689 0.244688304435 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0233294284592 0.084324248473 28% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0369900359108 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0568193102902 0.151304729494 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0661678732045 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.0946893788 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 50.2224549098 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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