the bar charts below show the marriage and divorce statistics for eight countries in 1981 and 1994.

Essay topics:

the bar charts below show the marriage and divorce statistics for eight countries in 1981 and 1994.

The given layouts depict the information about two statistics such as; marriage statistics and divorce statistics by eight countries during the year of 1981and 1994. The data is calibrated in thousands.

It can be seen that the highest marriage statistic was in USA whereas in Denmark the statistic of people were very lowest during the year of 1981. Apart from this the people doing marriage in equal proportion in Japan in the year of 1981 and 1984. Moreover, in Finland, Germany and Fernce the people doing marriage was 6.2, 6 and 5.9 thousands respectively.

In addition to this, divorce statistics was equal in Germany during the year of 1981 and 1994 as well as only in the USA, the growth was higher and after that it declined in all countries. However, the divorce of people in UK, Japan and Finland had been 4.5, 1.3and 2.6 respectively.

Overall, it is evident that the lowest rate of divorce was only in Italy. Moreover, the rate of marriage and divorce was highest in UK countries.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, moreover, well, whereas, apart from, in addition, such as, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 831.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 172.0 196.424390244 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83139534884 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56907677765 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 87.0 106.607317073 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.505813953488 0.547539520022 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 242.1 283.868780488 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.0927674356 43.030603864 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.3333333333 112.824112599 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1111111111 22.9334400587 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.66666666667 5.23603664747 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264317941221 0.215688989381 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107327509543 0.103423049105 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.087167861856 0.0843802449381 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172125265696 0.15604864568 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.072133567871 0.0819641961636 88% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.2329268293 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 11.4140731707 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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