The bar charts below show the marriage and divorce statistics for eight countries in 1981 and 1994.

Essay topics:

The bar charts below show the marriage and divorce statistics for eight countries in 1981 and 1994.

The given layouts describe the information about marriage and divorce statistics by eight nations during the year of 1981 and 1994. Data is calibrated in thousands.

It can be seen that the highest statistical data was from the USA country whereas, the lowest was from Italy nation. Apart from all this in the year of 1981 at least 6 thousand people were taken a marriage. This ratio declined in the year of 1994. Moreover, Denmark and France people ratio who took a marriage in the year of 1994 had 6.5 and 4.5 thousand people respectively.

As far as, trend was concerned Italy was a main country where few people got divorce in the year of 1981 and 1994. Either Finland or Denmark had never acrossed the ratio of 3 thousand. Furthermore, the divorce ratio of USA, UK and Germany in the year of 1981 was 5.5,2.7 and 3 thousand people respectively.

Overall, it is evidence that USA was a famous nation where people had taken much marriages and divorces.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 77, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
... a famous nation where people had taken much marriages and divorces.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, moreover, whereas, apart from, at least

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 798.0 965.302439024 83% => OK
No of words: 169.0 196.424390244 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72189349112 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53143812591 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 90.0 106.607317073 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.532544378698 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 232.2 283.868780488 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.0295459858 43.030603864 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.8 112.824112599 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9 22.9334400587 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.2 5.23603664747 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197410703164 0.215688989381 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0854492283969 0.103423049105 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.084591188541 0.0843802449381 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140843435474 0.15604864568 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0821242257284 0.0819641961636 100% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.2329268293 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.8 11.4140731707 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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