It is suggested that world cup and some international sporting events are becoming the safe way to reduce political tensions and extreme patriotic spirit. In my opinion, I completely agree with this idea to promote relations between nations.
In the one hand, international strains in worldwide relations could be eased through popular sporting occasions. These activities not only give opportunities to interact but also increase the solidarity in international relations. Through sharing the same hobbies about sport, both soccer-players and football-fans would be brought closer in the harmony through cheering up their national squad. As a result, the distance of culture diversity was replaced by international support and expectations. For example, in 2011, a football match between North Korea and South Korea was revealed. Although it is a rare event show the positive interaction of two rivals, solidarity was significantly prevailed in a short term instead of political and ideological tensions.
On the other hand, releasing the patriotic unity has became one of the most crucial influence of international sport occasions. Hundreds of people could go for a long distance for just one-day football match to show their encouragement for national footballers along the games. If there is a predominant of scores, not only soccer-fans but also national citizens of beneficial team would be extremely proud of. The semi-final of AFC U23 Championship, for instance, with the win of Vietnamese squad, has released solely patriotic emotions of the locals.
In conclusion, while there are still existed international discrepancy, I believe that organizing sport events tend to reduce strains among nations along with promoting solidarity and patriotic spirit
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 54, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'become'.
Suggestion: become
...hand, releasing the patriotic unity has became one of the most crucial influence of in...
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Line 7, column 201, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...romoting solidarity and patriotic spirit
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, still, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1506.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.6404494382 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15081681814 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.621722846442 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.5798064295 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.846153846 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5384615385 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.23076923077 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.308013704687 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101502710499 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104586451141 0.0667982634062 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181766118473 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0540897997725 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.43 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.42 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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