Popular events like the football World Cup and other international sporting occasions are essential in easing international tensions and releasing patriotic emotions in a safe way.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
It is believed that some sporting events including the football world cup and Olympic Games have immnse power in maintaining relationship among states and liberating patriotic feelings in such extreme cases by secure way. I personally agree with the statement and referring some arguments will be discussed further.
First of all, popular athletic occurence serve nations to evaluate each other reasonably and bring them together. The Olympic Games is one of the most adequate sample of that how various states appreciate each other’s culture, traditions and religious by assembling in the city where the events occur. Ultimately, it could definely reduce international pressures.Furthermore, the football world cup and other such occasions are the reasonable option to illustrate their patriotic feelings in an efficient method. Particularly, in the intense competitions sporting representatives attempt to demonstrate the powerfulness and superiority of their nations by their capacity and patriotic spirit. Hence, these athletic occasions have maintained the peace among countries in a safe way.
Secondly, it is tremendous opportunity for some developing countries to stand on their feet as well as gain reputation amid states. For instance, although there were numerous capable sporting professionals in Brazil, they suffered from poverty, famine, lack of education and whatsoever. The football world cup submitted them to prove their best as a result Brazilian football team achieved three times astonishingly the world cup.
On the other hand, in some sports games losing gangs and their supporters neglect to control their emotional sentiments and induce some conflicts including bullying or disrespectful to the rival groups. Consequently, correlation among countries has weakened and eliminates their esteem.
Having investigated the both aspects, it appears to me that popular athletic occurence like the football world cup and other international games play a vital role to retain the world peace among nations as well as liberate patriotic emotions in a secure way.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, furthermore, hence, second, secondly, so, well, for instance, as a result, as well as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1830.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.70093457944 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11246291444 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588785046729 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 572.4 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.1932477323 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.714285714 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9285714286 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.92857142857 7.06120827912 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.32327700039 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106029976915 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109230589712 0.0667982634062 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187648360314 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.1191222684 0.056905535591 209% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 50.2224549098 64% => It means the essay is relatively harder to read.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.08 12.4159519038 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.34 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 78.4519038076 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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