Women plays more important role in every aspect of our life in few decades. However, some sorts of gender inequalities continue to exist in a completely different context of cultural norms, political and social rights. I agree with this statement for some reasons below.
On the one hand, equal rights movements has giving women more chance to gain qualifications and pursue a career. Firstly, there is a growing number of those who enter the professional training program and enter higher education. Therefore, they acquire more experience and knowledge, thereby, they hold the positions in the fields which before heavily dominated by men. In addition, in modern society, women are more independent on financial condition. In lieu of becoming homemaker and scarifying their career after having a baby, they continue their work and develop their career prospect or even become the breadwinners in the family. This can be seen vividly in the developing country where men tend to be free to leave their jobs in order to assume household responsibilities.
On the other hand, It is unequivocal that women is not treated as equally as men.
Firstly, these individuals despite , The transformation in family structure is indistinct
Due to the fact that they are mainly responsible of childcare and domestic tasks while at the same time making their living, they don’t have enough time to devote their capacities to society. As a result, the rate of women engaging with high position such as director and management is meager compared to that of men. Another social norm that we have to face is the sexual violence both outside of marriage and inside of marriage. Wives is usually the victim of anger of their husband and suffer from aggressive behaviour is salient issue related to inequality.
In conclusion, Despite of the role of women remain devalued by society. The government and the public should take some steps to handle the unequality
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, so, therefore, while, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1641.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16037735849 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79023280775 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62893081761 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 531.0 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.7710789902 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.5625 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.875 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.375 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0744121356526 0.244688304435 30% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.024013211233 0.084324248473 28% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0160757533152 0.0667982634062 24% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.038177717017 0.151304729494 25% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00802388079842 0.056905535591 14% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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