The position of women has changed a great deal in many societies over the past 50 years. But these societies cannot claim to have achieved gender equality.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Over five decades, woman position in society has changed significantly. This phenomenon can be noticed by the competition of women in jobs which larger than previous. However, for some people this competition has not met equality of gender. In this essay, I would like to say that I am totally agreed with later statements due to several reasons below.
Women usually receive negative assumption which said that they are lack of knowledge and capability. Mostly, this assumption comes from company and industry. The assumption makes employers prefer more to hire men rather than women. However, students that graduated from higher education showed a contrasting data which showed that female students can compete with men and for some universities the graduated women are higher than men. Therefore, the limitation from the company, somehow has limited women chance to gain better jobs.
Another reason is regulation that is not supported for women to balance his duty as worker at the same time as a mother. Even though, women already have a good change in their career, sometimes their working hour is not suitable to family women. Therefore, it becomes a duty for government to rule a regulation that supports them. A good example for this is by regulated a working hour limitation that has to be followed by the company.
In summary, it is true that nowadays woman position in society better that in the past. However, it is still not equality in gender enough due to the negative presumption and the lack of regulation that support women in their jobs.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, still, therefore, as to, in summary, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1310.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05791505792 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63551342979 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.544401544402 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 423.0 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.6153466287 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.3333333333 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2666666667 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.26666666667 7.06120827912 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130228314095 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0489268651931 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0581121074028 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.089175442806 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0424639953314 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.