There is an opinion held by a section of the society that, fewer responsibilities in a child's life is postive development, while there are others, who think that it is not a good sign and needs attention. I find it more logical to endorse the former view, the reasons for which will be enumerated in this essay.
On the other hand, one of the main reasons why some people has a negative attitude towards this trend is that, in their view, with iyy responsibilities children will not be a responsible citizen. In the past, children were the ones who did most of the household works, and as a result, when they grew up they were able to live a healthy citizens who contributed to the benefit of the society. Without responsibilities this would have been impossible. The Chinese billionaire Jack Ma is a shining example for this. In an interview he said that, he was the one who did all the works in his house and those responsibilities helped him to come back from his failures.
On the other hand, I believe that having fewer responsibilities is a positive development. This is because, children can spend more time with their family and friends whtn they are free from responsibilities. This will improve their interpersonal skills and will lead to the absence of problems such as bullying, delinquency and truancy in later life. For instance, a study conducted by the Oxford University press in 2018 found out that, children who spent more time with their family behaved properly in the public than their counterparts. Moreover, children can concentrate more on their studies and career during these times. This will improve their academic achievement.
In conclusion, I believe that fewer responsibilities for children is a good trend because it allows them to spend more time with their loved ones and also enable them to concentrate on their studies and career.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 338, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'citizen'?
Suggestion: citizen
...rew up they were able to live a healthy citizens who contributed to the benefit of the s...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1557.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89622641509 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98562176845 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.537735849057 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 485.1 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.1682532851 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.214285714 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7142857143 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.42857142857 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19211316078 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0707771740581 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0828244042883 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111741684253 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0318904183844 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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